took a little bit for me to remember the storyline in the whore verse you wrote but I remember it now and it made this story more interesting! and Shige with eyeliner... sounds hotter than it looks. lol. but i definitely loved it!!
I feel like it'd be someone at the school's financial office. Especially if Shige's mother has a receipt from the school, someone screwed up somewhere.
laknslh All I can imagine is Ryo being a terrifying presence, looming over Shige's shoulder and glaring at the finaid people even though he is actually shorter than Shige.
I love how you introduce a little bit of conflict into RyoShige's life together and I love that Ryo was the one to come back and save Shige from the hell that is eyeliner + drunk old men. {shudders}
Ryo finally got his wish! And Shige is saving money! And they're living happily together and Ryo is not being a demanding drama queen by forcing Shige to moving-in sex. He's learned to be considerate. It's a big step compared to the Ryo we first meet at the beginning of the whore!verse~
I love this! And I loved this chapter. A bit of conflict, a bit of fluff, a bit of teasing and taunting and a whole lotta insecurities gently put aside. I do wonder what happened to Shige's paychecks and tuition...sucks how he lost so much money by having his boss send in checks that were never received. X_X
So, I first read this at 11ish and then I was immediately told that not reading the whore!verse is unimaginable and proceeded to inhale, literally inhale, all that you have written up to so far. And honestly, you rock. I commented on most of the chapters, I think I sound repetitive after a while, like a broken record and I'd hate for you to have to deal with that :]
But I love this. I love love love it. I started out with some doubts about this, Shige as a whore and Ryo as the idol that falls in love with him. It's really Pretty Woman-esque and a lot could go wrong with that. But then the pieces started falling and everything just fell into place. Everything. It's not perfect, but God, it's pretty damn close. You never made it too smutty, and considering Shige's past profession, that would be so easy. The fluff was not over done either, and the subtle touches of romance in their everyday lives was just beautiful.
"We won't worry, since we know Nishikido-kun is a good person. And if the rent's the same and he's letting you stay in a
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Dude, you were practically on the war path in terms of commenting! Yeah, you did flood my inbox like you mentioned, but I felt so much love that I didn't mind at all~ ♥
I'm glad reading all the chapters help you through finals! Writing this chapter was actually was I did during between my final essays for some classes when I couldn't stand to think about Hezbollah or financial crises anymore.
And if you don't mind my asking, who told that "not reading the whore!verse is unimaginable"?
I also have to say that I started writing this whole thing last December/January, and I didn't see Pretty Woman until this past August. So any similarities are purely coincidental, cause the other thing I knew about that movie was that it had Richard Gere in it, and I'm not a fan of his.
But yeah. Thank you for reading and commenting so much! I really enjoyed reading everything you wrote ♥
Haha! I really apologize for that, I even eased up on the commenting half way through because I didn't want your box to explode. Sorry! I'll be back to comment so expect more later on? I kind of tend to ramble and have been known to leave rather long comments sometimes :DDDD
Finals stress like no other! I'm glad you wrote this :] Writing takes the pressure away from having to focus on studies 24/7 (although technically that's what I should be doing but I couldn't resist your fic! xDD).
Ah, it was misticloud and psyches_muse ♥ Gem said it was "the jem of Nishikato fandom", how could I possibly pass that up?
I saw that movie so many times lol. They replay it lot and inevitably I end up watching bits and pieces. I like Julia Roberts a lot so :]
Thank you for writing!!! And updating in a time in which the fandom is sorely in need of great Nishikato fics ♥♥♥♥
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Also, shouldn't they figure out what happened to the money... x.x That's a lot of it...
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cause I have no way to explain it...
Some one at the post office jacked his checks?
I have no idea. I'm not a hypothetical criminal mastermind.
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laknslh All I can imagine is Ryo being a terrifying presence, looming over Shige's shoulder and glaring at the finaid people even though he is actually shorter than Shige.
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LOL XD i can always tolerate myself with 2 whore!verse running together on a different Nishikato XD
*it's another way to say that i'm addicted to whore!shige* XDXDXDXDXD
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Whore!Shige is kind of hard to write, especially since I killed that part, but it's interesting, isn't it? ♥
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I love how you introduce a little bit of conflict into RyoShige's life together and I love that Ryo was the one to come back and save Shige from the hell that is eyeliner + drunk old men. {shudders}
Ryo finally got his wish! And Shige is saving money! And they're living happily together and Ryo is not being a demanding drama queen by forcing Shige to moving-in sex. He's learned to be considerate. It's a big step compared to the Ryo we first meet at the beginning of the whore!verse~
I love this! And I loved this chapter. A bit of conflict, a bit of fluff, a bit of teasing and taunting and a whole lotta insecurities gently put aside. I do wonder what happened to Shige's paychecks and tuition...sucks how he lost so much money by having his boss send in checks that were never received. X_X
Amazing as usual~&hearts
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Maybe it would have been more realistic if I'd had Shige's checkbook stolen...
Too late now.
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But I love this. I love love love it. I started out with some doubts about this, Shige as a whore and Ryo as the idol that falls in love with him. It's really Pretty Woman-esque and a lot could go wrong with that. But then the pieces started falling and everything just fell into place. Everything. It's not perfect, but God, it's pretty damn close. You never made it too smutty, and considering Shige's past profession, that would be so easy. The fluff was not over done either, and the subtle touches of romance in their everyday lives was just beautiful.
"We won't worry, since we know Nishikido-kun is a good person. And if the rent's the same and he's letting you stay in a ( ... )
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I'm glad reading all the chapters help you through finals! Writing this chapter was actually was I did during between my final essays for some classes when I couldn't stand to think about Hezbollah or financial crises anymore.
And if you don't mind my asking, who told that "not reading the whore!verse is unimaginable"?
I also have to say that I started writing this whole thing last December/January, and I didn't see Pretty Woman until this past August. So any similarities are purely coincidental, cause the other thing I knew about that movie was that it had Richard Gere in it, and I'm not a fan of his.
But yeah. Thank you for reading and commenting so much! I really enjoyed reading everything you wrote ♥
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Finals stress like no other! I'm glad you wrote this :] Writing takes the pressure away from having to focus on studies 24/7 (although technically that's what I should be doing but I couldn't resist your fic! xDD).
Ah, it was misticloud and psyches_muse ♥ Gem said it was "the jem of Nishikato fandom", how could I possibly pass that up?
I saw that movie so many times lol. They replay it lot and inevitably I end up watching bits and pieces. I like Julia Roberts a lot so :]
Thank you for writing!!! And updating in a time in which the fandom is sorely in need of great Nishikato fics ♥♥♥♥
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