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Hue/Saturation

Jul 29, 2010 19:14

TITLE: Hue/Saturation
CHARACTER: Ryo
RATING: R, for drug-use and suicide
WORD COUNT: 1,012
SUMMARY: Ryo seeks an escape, and he finds it with friends. (For sanjihan, who gave me "Kanjani8/NewS - a species of delirium" as a prompt, and for some reason this morning I woke up wanting to write a Ryo/drug fic, and this is how I took it.)

( Hue/Saturation )

indiv.: ryo, #one-shot, r: r, genre: au

Comments 26

lonelyxlovers July 30 2010, 07:53:27 UTC

oh, i'm so glad you wrote this! i've been in the mood for some dark!fic lately, so this was kind of perfect.

yey_yey July 31 2010, 02:26:30 UTC

I normally don't write dark!fic, so this was a new adventure for me...

Glad you liked it ♥

zheinpathos July 30 2010, 09:24:07 UTC

OH MY GOD

O____O

I'm speechless. Lovely work! <3

yey_yey July 31 2010, 02:26:45 UTC

Thanks!

bellemainec July 30 2010, 10:04:28 UTC

gorgeous writing. loved the details and the languorous way he indulges and then depends on the buzz...poor sweetheart *cuddles Ryo* beautifully written.

yey_yey July 31 2010, 02:29:02 UTC

Thanks! I don't know much of anything about drug use/abuse, so this was kind of a shot in the dark.

bellemainec July 31 2010, 09:11:48 UTC

well as someone who has never used drugs either, I think you came up with a plausible way for him to want to use them and then need to use them :)

So your shot in the dark worked for me :)

beltenebra July 30 2010, 12:37:56 UTC

I was pointed towards this fic by two different friends and I am really glad they sent me here because this was amazing.

I loved the stark contrast between the two worlds but that you made it clear he feels like he belongs in both of them.

Really, your phrasing and descriptions were amazing. And I loved the whole mood of it, sad and twisted but not depressing...

If you are interested, je_squickfic sign-ups are open for a few more days. ^_^

yey_yey July 31 2010, 02:27:20 UTC

Thank you!
(And, I went ahead and signed up for je_squickfic.)

imifumei July 30 2010, 13:45:51 UTC

This was a really interesting concept and I think you pulled it off flawlessly.

I love the contrast of white and rainbow, the way you'd think they would clash or one whould outweigh the other, but really they blend perfectly.

This was wonderful, thank you.

yey_yey July 31 2010, 02:29:59 UTC

Thanks! ♥

(The drugs have to work together, at least, if his life doesn't >_<)