果てし無いそら “ Endless Sky” [One-shot]

[yeyell15]

Title:果てし無いそら　“ Endless Sky”
Author: yeyell15
Pairing:OkaJima
Genre: Angst, Romance, AU
Summary: or rather a preview? :D "As long as you can smile, as bright as that sky…it’s enough…"
Requested by: ai_no_messeji
Chotto STOP!: Bold words are Yuto’s

Comments

[ai_no_messeji]

my spot :3

[yeyell15]

douzooo~

[ai_no_messeji]

Honestly, the first time I read this. It was quite in disarray, it's lacking of something. However, something dropped inside my chest when I got in the middle part. It shattered. And that, that's a good impact on me when it comes to angst. I like how raw the emotions here are played out.

Especially the desperation and the longing OH MY GOD... that's just, it brought me into tears.

Especially this,

“Yuto…” he smiled upon opening his eyes and looked up at the sky “you know what, I miss you so much…” he bit his lower lip. “But hey, I’m keeping my promise…” he played on the silver band which was resting on his ring finger “I’m not crying anymore…” he proudly said -Liar- “I always smile just like you asked me to…” -You were crying just now- “So wherever you are, please smile too…” he reached out his hand, looking at the shining ring on his finger. “But, you know, I can’t…” again a lone tear “I can’t just stop them…” he sobbed “I just can’t, not now that I miss you so much, gomen ne…I can’t stop them…they’re stubborn…” he chuckled a

[yeyell15]

I tried to fix them!!! >A< but i can't find the others lol XDD but anyways watta long feedback you have there!!! BWAAHHAHAHAHA

I loveschuuu~ <3

Di ba~ kahit ako e nung binasa ko ulit ay jusko my heart...naiisip ko pa yung naiyak na Keito huuuuuu

[alsykt]

*sniffs sniffs*
the way Keito is trying to hold his tears but can't because he misses Yuto so much is just so heart breaking...waaaa this is why I can't stand angst. T^T

Yutooooooo come backkkkkk. ...>w<....

but I'm glad I read it. ^_^

[yeyell15]

Yey! My second reader! :D *throws confetti*

Woah~ *pats* It's heartbreaking right! ;A;
I cried too while writing this, so I'm really glad you liked it!

Sorry for the grammar though~ thank you for reading and commenting! I really appreciate it! :)