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[Challenge Entry] Letter M: Mischiefshipping

Oct 01, 2011 16:21

Title: Living Error
Challenge Letter: M
Prompt: was not used
Pairing: Mischiefshipping (Mana x Thief King Bakura), as well as slight unnamed (Dark Magician Girl x Thief King Bakura)
Warnings: I don't really see anything to warn for, so, N/A
Summary: AU/AR Bakura and Mana meet Dark Magician Girl. Problems arise. Bakura is a womanizing tease. And other ( Read more... )

c: thief king bakura, *fic: challenge entry, p: mischiefshipping (thief bakura/mana), c: dark magician girl, *genre: ot3 +, c: mana

Comments 4

laurose8 October 2 2011, 01:25:10 UTC

Thanks for both excellent mischief and magic, well written.

The action is exciting and enjoyable, as are the actors. The description of the rules is riveting.

audrey_scarlet October 2 2011, 03:40:29 UTC

Thank-you for the kind comments! That's a relief to hear, this whole story was me getting a bit out of my comfort zone for what I normally write so I'm glad it seems okay. :)

halfthewords October 2 2011, 11:57:03 UTC

Oh, I love this -- Bakura being a completely lovable jackass and DMG and Mana. JUST. EVERYTHING OK.

"She's not going to let you touch her again," Dark Magician Girl speculated thoughtfully.

Favourite line! Well done on this, you did an awesome job. :D

audrey_scarlet October 2 2011, 17:29:17 UTC

Thank-you so much! I appreciate your comments! I'm glad you liked it =) (awesome icon by the way)