First of all this last scene was incredibly beautiful! I will keep this picture of Jared, Jensen and their baby sleeping cuddled together on the bed in my mind for whenever I need a smile today. ♥
Otherwise I love how your story is so different from most mpreg stories! It's our universe but you came up with a convincing explanation why a man could be pregnant within our world. And you described the problems coming with it. Being a research subject, being afraid of the press and having to hide... So much more than fluffy family stuff! Which was still there in your story and I do love as well... ;)
Oh and last but not least I am really impressed that you wrote a story like this as your first fic even though English isn't your first language. I am German and I just started writing in English... Argh so difficult! ^^
Thank you!!! :D I worte the last scene hoping it made someone who read this feel warm in heart. I'm soooo glad it could make you smile :) You commented about things what I wanted to write in here. I got an idea about this story when I watched a programe about human consciousness on discovery channel. It was really interesting programe so I couldn't stop thinking about it and I was wondering if it is really possible to transfer human consciousness to computer as some scientists said. I wanted to write a story about love by using this idea. And the result is this fic :) I don't want to whine but...Yes, it was soooo hard to write in English (;_;) Actually, I wanted to write more scenes but I had to give up because of my poor English. Well, honestly I got frustrated so I just wanted to give up this fic. But with your comment I'm glad I didn't give up :) Thanks <333 Oh, you're German. I envy you! I started to study German but it is too difficult for me :(
Oooh you are from Japan! Haha, this is kind of funny because I did Japanese at uni for one semester and it is sooo difficult! Still I loved it because it's very different from all other languages I know. I really hope I find the time to continue with it... ^^ However, since I taught German for a semester I know how difficult it is to learn. All the articles
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Oh, did you learn Japanese? What a coincidence. It's interesting to find out things like this :) Yes, I agree that Japanese is difficult to learn. Well, especially Kanji(Chinese character). I know learning foreign language is very difficult and need to be patient but it just hard not to be frustrated
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Otherwise I love how your story is so different from most mpreg stories! It's our universe but you came up with a convincing explanation why a man could be pregnant within our world. And you described the problems coming with it. Being a research subject, being afraid of the press and having to hide... So much more than fluffy family stuff! Which was still there in your story and I do love as well... ;)
Oh and last but not least I am really impressed that you wrote a story like this as your first fic even though English isn't your first language. I am German and I just started writing in English... Argh so difficult! ^^
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I worte the last scene hoping it made someone who read this feel warm in heart. I'm soooo glad it could make you smile :)
You commented about things what I wanted to write in here. I got an idea about this story when I watched a programe about human consciousness on discovery channel. It was really interesting programe so I couldn't stop thinking about it and I was wondering if it is really possible to transfer human consciousness to computer as some scientists said. I wanted to write a story about love by using this idea. And the result is this fic :)
I don't want to whine but...Yes, it was soooo hard to write in English (;_;) Actually, I wanted to write more scenes but I had to give up because of my poor English. Well, honestly I got frustrated so I just wanted to give up this fic. But with your comment I'm glad I didn't give up :) Thanks <333
Oh, you're German. I envy you! I started to study German but it is too difficult for me :(
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