Fic: Above, Between, and Under, Part 2/2

[yixsh]

Ed doesn’t talk much that night, but he positively glows from his position on the couch. He keeps up the facade of reading Al’s book as Al draws a transmutation circle to fix the cracked dish, but every so often he’ll smile a mysterious little smile into the pages.

At ten o’clock, when both of them are thoroughly exhausted - Ed so much that he’s

Comments

[esteltinuviel]

Well, I already gave my criticism (congrats on the first place) but this was just amazing to read. Alphonse is so... perfectly human it boggles the mind. Everything about this was literary, deep, just so overwhelmingly good that I was sitting at my computer going "OO" for about five minutes trying to think of what to say.

[militsa]

[shanola22]

It is so nice to come home from a long day at work and find such a great story waiting for you to devour. *happy sigh*

This had depth and feeling and I loved that it is from Al's POV. I like seeing Edward and Roy and Riza through his eyes and, most importantly, his emotions.

Take a bow, luv. You deserve it!

[dreamer1789]

Oh, wow! That was so original, so very cool, so very sad, so very sweet in the end. ^^ (yup, that's a happy fic-induced comment ;) )

The idea of all the Sins incorporated in all, and the way you've made this work: ♥.

[sevlow]

very sweet. I love the way you write; it's so stream-of-thought without being pretentious. Plus, I gottan love stabby!Al. mmm.