Fic: Vagabonds (2/?)

Jul 03, 2008 04:01


Title: Vagabonds - Chapter Two
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lalikaa July 5 2008, 16:53:19 UTC
Ah... so addicting... D8

Noooo! Rose, you stay away from Ed! *le sigh* Too bad you're not manga!Rose. She's much patter. :P

Kain... named after her dead lover... how cute. <3 (no, really; I'm being serious)

Bravo for going so in-depth into the anime. It only makes since the government would need a couple of scapegoats... Dx

I love the Ed/Al embrace thing. So touching. :*D

Can't wait for more! <3

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dreamer1789 July 5 2008, 17:28:53 UTC
*glomp* This chapter!! XD (Incoherency warning) It's fun and touching and just - :D The Kain hero-worshipping be-my-daddy was just too cute. ^^ Rose jumping Ed and Ed freaking about it, made of win. And you can't go wrong with Granny. And of course the unmanly embrace. ^^ Somehow, I'm still having a hard time imagining Ed saying 'Ich Lieve Dich,' even to Al, but brilliant. The lot of it.
And hooray, Mustang's coming to save the day! (or at least help out a bit - eventually.)

Lol, but you know what the trouble is with writing such a good update? ;) Everyone is asking you: 'so when's the next chapter?' XD So I won't - I'll just think it. *whistles innocently*

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tiaordona July 5 2008, 17:59:12 UTC
Yes! This is going so well! The writing itself is beautiful, but so are the pictures...they really bring out the scenes that would enhance the whole story.

My favorite part was probably Kain. The way he mirrored Ed was just...wow. I was impressed by how well that was pulled off. :D

Um, random alert! You play Trauma Center, right? Did you play UTK2 yet?

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ceirwy July 6 2008, 23:09:37 UTC
Oooooo. I stumbled on this and wow I'm not disappointed. Fabulously done, and your art ads a nice touch.

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sdiath July 7 2008, 00:51:51 UTC
This story is compelling and the illustrations are great.

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