Fic: Dawn (2/4)

[yixsh]

Title: Dawn, Part 2 of 4
Pairings/Characters: Edward, Roy
Rating: M/R
Genre: Drama, Angst
Spoilers: None - Alternate ending, TWT?
Word Count: +/- 9100
Cumulative Word Count: +/- 16800
Warnings: Language, violence, gore.
Summary:  Ed and Roy are stuck in a war zone. Gratuitous hurt!Roy for the sake of hurt!Roy ensues.
Previous Parts:  1
Notes:  PHEW.  FINALLY

Comments

[vwl]

HEY I LOVE THIS FIC

HURRAH FOR GRATIUTOUS ROY HURTING

I like how Drachma turned into Russia for a minute there. Which is actually really funny, because they all had Russian accents in my head and I didn't realize it until the one guy said something about "Mother Drachma" and suddenly, it was all Metal Gear Solid and its giant boner for Russia. What.

I'm done talking nonsense now. <3 RITE MOAR.

HERE IS A SINGING ROY AND MAES (LOOK HOW NOT DEAD HE IS) FOR YOUR VIEWING PLEASURE

[monaki]

I love this. The part where he realizes how alchemy-'tarded they are and decides to pull the wool over their eyes made me grin like an idiot. :D Finally, something positive, lol!

Keep it up, it's good stuff!

[sevlow]

Holy sweet crap, I'm entranced!

Your Hurty!Roy and Freaked-Out!Ed are simply delicious. I eagerly await the next installment of pure awesomeness.

[amethyst_koneko]

Ok. Part of me wanted to slap the hell out of Ed for not killing those 3 Drachmans and letting himself and Roy get captured and a part of me really understood Ed's logic of letting it happen - damn it. *pouts* There really was no way they could have escaped on their own and even using these damnable Drachmans is better than dying needlessly. *pouts some more* You've done a great job with Ed here. He is (basically) still a kid who's not military trained and it really shows. His indecision and confusion are no different from how any regular person thrust into this hellish situation would feel, how they would react. It pleased me immensely that Ed put little flaws into the guns he was fixing! Can't let these Drachman sonsofbitches win completely now can we? *smirk* It also amused me that the Drachman leader thinks Roy is Xingian and not Amestrian! :D Can't wait for chapter 3 where (hopefully!) Roy and Ed will be getting some revenge! *evil grin*

[vicemage]

I never follow fanfic... but this is good! I'll be waiting for the final part. ^_^