Prompt Post - Part Ten

Mar 11, 2012 17:03


I am REALLY, REALLY SORRY about taking so long, guys, and about not being around much recently. I've been busier than I have in a while, and it just kept slipping my mind between uni applications and volunteering and all sorts- for some reason I thought we were much further off a new post.

If there is anything I haven't responded to, as of now, I'm ( Read more... )

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billy torture and angst, hurt/comfort? anonymous April 12 2012, 10:09:01 UTC
Not enough Billy!whump on this meme! So...

Captain Marvel is captured as Billy by an enemy who knows his secret ID, who somehow messes with his ability to transform and tortures him horribly for a lengthy period of time.

Bonus if the whole time, Billy remaints totally optimistic that the league or the team will come save him. Double bonus for rescue and hurt/comfort at the end with anyone from either of those groups (like Batman or Wonder Woman from the league, or any of the team members or all of them I don't care) helping Billy recover or letting him talk through stuff that happened or anything.

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Re: billy torture and angst, hurt/comfort? anonymous April 12 2012, 12:00:59 UTC
*unf*! My poor, aching heart! It's just been kicked! TT.TT Billy! You can do it Billy!

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Darkness 1/3 anonymous April 12 2012, 15:15:11 UTC
a/n: Derp, first time filling, hope it's good nonnie.

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Pain.

Darkness.

A low moan… from himself?

Foggy haze swirled, masking the scene before him. Light glinted. metallic gleam, ohcrapthatwasn’tgood-

BANG!

Pain.

Darkness.

Lights out.

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Eyes slowly slid open, words drifting into ears like the whisper of butterfly wings on a summer day.

“Captain Marvel.”

No. Hurts too much, can’t be- A throbbing from the left leg, a steady pound of an ancient rhythm of life. Ba-dump. Ba-dump. Ba-dump.

“Shazam.”

Bright flash…

And nothing.

“Poor little guy, it won’t work.”

“Shazam.”

Bright flash.

Pain.

“Don’t try it again kiddo- it won’t work and all you’ll bring yourself is more pain. So tell me, how does it feel to be helpless?”

Helpless?

This wasn’t helplessness.

Not yet.

Eyes closed, and gentle darkness stole him away. It was the last gentleness.

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“You still haven’t answered the question you know.” The casual words, as pain slowly trickled down past ribs, burning and eating. He held a bottle, ( ... )

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Darkness 2/3 anonymous April 12 2012, 15:16:50 UTC
Blank is good. Blank means less pain. Less pain is nice. Don’t forget what nice is. It’s important.

“Give it up child. There is no such thing as nice.”

Warm hands, a cookie before bed, a smile.

“Liar.” Weak and raspy, dry as the Sahara Desert, wind rattling through narrow pipes. Still there, still defiant, still confident. “Nice is home.”

A warm bed, someone who waits, bed time and food whenever wished. Home is nice. So very, very nice.

Darkness snapped and slavered, waiting for the inevitable fall. Pain tethered and teetered on the brink. Pain, darkness. Pain. Darkness. Pain. Darkness. Pain. Darkness. Pain. Darkness. Paindarkness. paindarkness.

Where are they?

Not here.

Very well then; they will come- merely have to wait.

Cling to sanity on a island made of firm iron and rock. It won’t bend, it won’t break.

They will come.

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Voices.

Speaking.

To who?

To me

What are they saying?

Have they come yet ( ... )

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Darkness 3/3 anonymous April 12 2012, 15:20:28 UTC
Warm. It was warm. So very nice and warm, a gentle warmth that sang through is body, filtering like light through leaves on a golden summer day. A happy feeling. A warm feeling.

Everything is right in the world.

Everything is fine.

Slowly eyes slid open to the gentle glow of a lantern hanging next to the doorway. The room was bathed in that soft light, shapes of what looked like plants…flowers?...shimmering along the edge of the light.

The light wantonly spilled across sheets, play hide and go seek with the darkness.

The darkness swirled for a moment, and for an awful moment, he thought he was going backThe darkness softened, and drew back ( ... )

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Re: Darkness 3/3 a_bit_fanatic April 13 2012, 01:15:37 UTC
Very, very good. I love the formatting, I love everything. Please keep writing.

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OP anonymous April 14 2012, 11:33:40 UTC
HOW DID I NOT SEE THAT THIS HAD BEEN POSTED

I just I jfdkal

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This is what you have reduced me to I mean OH BILLY ;_____;

I really liked the formatting!! And that it was Batman watching over him at the end, and the part with the knife - who was torturing him?? Oh Billy I just want to hug him ;AAAAA;

(Could there possibly be more in the future?? This was so wonderful I want to see some of the aftermath and GUH)

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Re: OP anonymous April 16 2012, 03:22:15 UTC
:P I'm glad you likkie OP!

But Billy's a little sweetheart, and Batman's a big mean old protector, and as for the torturer... I dunno. Maybe some other group?

(As for more, I must warn, it won't be in this formatting. I can't do this formatting for long, so you'll have to deal with plain old paragraphs. That fine with you?)

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OP anonymous April 16 2012, 08:31:53 UTC
Jafdkl;ja I LIKE IT SO MUCH YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW AND guh listen you could turn in additional chapters in binary I don't care how you format it just pleaaaaaaaaaase give me more please please please

(And Billy is the sweetest sweetheart <3)

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Healing 1/?? anonymous April 18 2012, 18:31:48 UTC
The dark knight of Gotham City hovered next to the light switch for a few moments more, waiting to see what the child would do next. He hadn’t expected to have such a strange reaction to the light- but neither had he expected for someone to discover Billy’s power and actually use that knowledge to hurt a little child ( ... )

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Healing 2/?? anonymous April 18 2012, 18:32:50 UTC
Billy’s head ducked, as he leaned slightly one way, as if trying to huddle into a wall. Mutely he shook his head. Batman paused, still standing, still looming above the child, before slowly settling onto the couch. He tugged his cape sideways; let it lie between him and Billy as an silent invitation to play with.

Some children talked better about traumatic incidents if they could cover their face- Billy was probably one on them.

Quickly he forced his mind back onto task, before he could overanalyze the child. This wasn’t an interrogation- it was an apology from the League about taking so long. Nobody should be forced into what Billy had just faced- and the League had failed him by not finding him near as fast as they should have.

“The League-“ He began, feeling the words roll off his tongue as heavily as rocks dropping into a koi pond.

Billy murmured again, softly, “You guys came.” That’s when Batman finally listened and no longer heardBilly had waited for them, through the torture, the pain, the screaming madness they had ( ... )

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Healing 3/?? anonymous April 18 2012, 18:33:58 UTC
A polite knock came at the door. “Superman?” They spoke from outside of the room, trying to keep from disturbing Billy- “Batman would like to talk to you. J’onn watch Billy until he goes to sleep.”

Superman nodded, knowing the other would catch it. The alien melted in through the door, reforming in green solidarity. He hesitated on the edge of the circle, before at last taking a seat nearby Billy.

Apparently he had been peeking in before, for his own cloak was within easy grabbing distance if Billy really wanted it.

Almost without looking, the child reached for it. J’onn didn’t twitch as the child’s curious fingers brushed against it, even though it wasn’t actually proper clothing at all. It would still feel like a cape. Soft as silk, but light as air ( ... )

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Healing 3/?? - OP anonymous April 18 2012, 20:06:08 UTC
Can I just

Can I just tell you that this is really, really good

I mean I'd say more than that but my heart just shattered in my chest and I probably ought to look into that

NhhhhGHHHHH just the little details oh God they had to shave Billy's head because his scalp was mangled so badly and he's hiding his face because he's scared I can't I just can't I

SOMEONE GET THAT BOY HIS UNCLE RIGHT NOW!!

(As a side note, I'm glad you have Batman in-character. Everyone, really. ;_;)

And oh Dinah. She is giving me all the feels right now.

Please please please more...!

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Re: Healing 3/?? - OP anonymous April 19 2012, 02:34:32 UTC
Glad I could provide you a service ma'm. That'd be two internet cookies :P Nah, don't worry about it.

They had to shave him, he's got broken bones galore, and he ain't going home anytime soon, but he will heal. For Billy is incorruptible pureness. Teh wizard said so XD

(I'm glad everyones in character. Really, really glad)

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Re: Healing 3/?? anonymous June 8 2012, 06:05:44 UTC
AAAAAAAAANDDD IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

WILLLLLL ALWAAAAAYS LOOOOVE THIS FIIIIIIIIIIIIIC

WILL AAAAAAAAAAAALLLWAYS LOOOOOOVE THIS FIIIIIIIIIIIIC

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Re: Healing 3/?? elvenknight16 July 20 2012, 00:07:14 UTC
This is Awesome!!
Please tell me you're going to continue this =]

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