Within Temptation - rated R - 1/?

[misst89]

Title: Within Temptation
Type: drabble
Word Count: 205
Rating: R (for swearing)
Disclaimer: Since this is an original fiction, I own all the characters.
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
A/N: This is an original fiction, based on real life situations. What it is like to live with a long suffering crush.

Comments

[alienfish]

Ah, I'm reminded of high school. *smile*

[misst89]

Hehe I'm glad you can relate to it. I think everyone can relate to having that special crush! :D

[vintagememories]

Oh wow that was really good, and you said you weren't very good at them. Don't be silly, that was great. I love the way it's written. Just one thing you pit him instead of me (at least I think you meant to put me, if not sorry) here.

girls around him and pick him up in his arms and we would embrace

Sorry, hope you don't mind me pointing that out, don't want to pick or anything.

[misst89]

Im glad you liked it! I was so nervous about posting it :)

[garoduty]

Excellent post I must say.. Simple but yet interesting and engaging.. Keep up the awesome work!

[misst89]

I'm so happy you liked it! Thank you for your kind comments. :)

[emeeukif]

Plain and simple! I like your work!

[misst89]

Thanks!