I have always liked Don and Terry together. She really seemed to have a certain bond with Don that no one ever did. I like the way you separated the emotions here; I trust you, I want you and I need you. It summarizes their relationship nicely. And, of course, the pictures are great. Thanks for taking the time to create this and share it with us.
I like this! I think using the pictures worked nicely, not just as a tool to make you feel more comfortable writing fic, but also as a narrative device... For example, the sequence of pictures made me think that the text was Terry's POV (with Don saying, "me too"). I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but that's how I interpreted it. :-) And your writing goes well with them
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So great the way you interpreted! that's exactly what I wanted: different sides, views! besides the "I trust you," "I want you," "I need you." in each block, I tried to do a "we" "she" "he" or "we" "he" "she" in each line. but truly, both can think all. cause the point is what they don't say... what they keep inside...
Many thanks for the English correction! I'll always need and appreciate that! Thank you! Great tip about the first-person!
I searched about drabble writing and as I understand it's a complete idea written in 100 words, am I right? I want to write about thoughts. things that make sense for me in their heads (that's why the first person...). It can be a scene, like the post before this, with Don/Colby first meeting Liz, or it can be the episode, like this one. I looked at the images and just tried to read their minds... make sense? I don't think I can create another story... I've no imagination! not to write about! lol! thoughts are good for now!
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I'm not a writer, never will be! LOL! but I was inspired by your story In His Own Words and I tried to play with their faces and thoughts!
I'm rewatching season 1 so lot's of Don and Terry in my heart!
xxoo Mari
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So great the way you interpreted! that's exactly what I wanted: different sides, views! besides the "I trust you," "I want you," "I need you." in each block, I tried to do a "we" "she" "he" or "we" "he" "she" in each line. but truly, both can think all. cause the point is what they don't say... what they keep inside...
Many thanks for the English correction! I'll always need and appreciate that! Thank you! Great tip about the first-person!
I searched about drabble writing and as I understand it's a complete idea written in 100 words, am I right? I want to write about thoughts. things that make sense for me in their heads (that's why the first person...). It can be a scene, like the post before this, with Don/Colby first meeting Liz, or it can be the episode, like this one. I looked at the images and just tried to read their minds... make sense? I don't think I can create another story... I've no imagination! not to write about! lol! thoughts are good for now!
xxoo Mari
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