[fic] gravity [AU][yoosu]
title: gravity
fandom: TVXQ
pairings: Yoochun/Junsu, minor Yoochun/Jaejoong.
rating: R
summary: Tall buildings block out the light and Yoochun writes songs that no one wants to hear. For Junsu, singing is breathing. It doesn't matter that the city is falling apart around them.
author's notes: AU fic, written for mimei for a whole sea of prompts but ( Read more... )
fandom: TVXQ
pairings: Yoochun/Junsu, minor Yoochun/Jaejoong.
rating: R
summary: Tall buildings block out the light and Yoochun writes songs that no one wants to hear. For Junsu, singing is breathing. It doesn't matter that the city is falling apart around them.
author's notes: AU fic, written for mimei for a whole sea of prompts but ( Read more... )
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ajhdshsad su!voice ♥
a trite pop ballad with lyrics made of phrases he’s heard somewhere else
this whole paragraph: so perfect.
the worst parts of the city are always near the centre of it, like the circles of hell.
hurts so good.
Like the way Yoochun doesn’t look as though he’s feeling anything at all
okay after here i gave up quoting or else i'd to have to quote the whole fucking fic back at you :||!
this is the best cityfic ever and i love it to bits, i swear i barely breathed, read it as snail-slow as possible, don't even know what to say yet, need to reread a million times. so. fucking. beautiful. ♥
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It is so not the best ever. And idk what to say. But I'm sososo glad you love it 'cause, I mean, I wrote it for you after all~ ♥
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w;uiorseo.
(incoherent)
♥♥♥ the pianos~
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I can't believe anyone bothered to read this!♥
Also, thanks for commenting. :D
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but the truth is that they’re all written note-for-note in Yoochun’s head, he just has no piano to practise them on.
oh god idek why i love it so much, just. love. his music. and oh god, yoochun's self-taught thing ;;
Each of Yoochun’s songs is a trite pop ballad with lyrics made of phrases he’s heard somewhere else. But each of them sounds beautifully raw coming from Yoochun’s clumsy fingers and untrained throat.
more of that. i lovee the way you built yoochun's character
the worst parts of the city are always near the centre of it, like the circles of hell. &
He says he’ll walk but the hole in the toe of his right shoe says different
so many lines like these, i felt i had to quote but would probably quote half your fic back to you. just, the comparisons and the reasoning is worded in such a lovely way.
Jaejoong might as well be a girl, if being ‘a girl’ implies that Yoochun has touched every inch of his ( ... )
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And I don't know what to say to your comments 'cause they are so wonderful. "So real that it hurts" and "desperate for something" was exactly what I wanted to convey.
I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading & posting such a lovely and thought-out comment.♥
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i love the description of yoochun's song writing - all in his head but no piano to practice on. idk why but it's kinda lovely.
the worst parts of the city are always near the centre of it, like the circles of hell. - yes!
Junsu’s seen more crash sites than beribboned wedding cars so maybe that’s just what he thinks love is. - amazing!
the whole thing is just gorgeous, really. one of the best pieces i've read in a while♥ the descriptions of the city and yoochun's songs and how he and junsu live. just perfect! pls to writing more yoosu;; all the time!!
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I love how everyone agrees about the worst parts of the city... I guess it shows just how uniform cities are & I kind of wanted to make this so it could be any city so I'm guessing it worked.
And such lovely compliments.♥ & I'm sure you and mimei will find a way to tie me to a word processor and force me to write yoosu all the time if you work together. :3
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I like it!
<3~
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