Control (S/J preslash)

[yminga]

Title: Control
Length: ~2000 words
Spoilers: nothing important, very slight ones for A Study In Pink
Important A/N: An extremely awesome person just emailed me with a beta'ed version of this, it was a complete and lovely surprise - thank you so so much!!

In answer to a prompt from the BBC Sherlock prompt meme: I would LOVE anyone who wrote something

Comments

[emsmiths]

The last line had me saying "Awwwwwwww"
Great fic

[yminga]

Best compliment you could pay me!!
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment, and for your kind words as well <3

[ms_hissyfit]

Me too. Totally an awwwww moment. And I really like the idea of a save haven that includes exploding eyeballs in the microwave!

[yminga]

I'm glad!! Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! <3
And you know it's not a home 'til the ratio of body parts found in kitchen appliances hasn't upped the quantity of actual food in the room ;) it's like basic Sherlockian mathematics or something.

PS: Eternal love on your icon.

[pinigir]

Loved it! Loved John's revelations and experiments and loved the ending.

[yminga]

You're the first to comment on the fic's structure in itself and I have to say I'm extremely glad you liked it!! I was afraid John looked a bit too in touch with his feelings, but I figured that as a doctor he was used to look for diagnosis + I can't help but see him as a sensie ;)
I'm very happy you liked the ending as well, as I was worried about it!
Thank you *so* much for taking the time to read and comment <3

[pinigir]

Glad that I could be of help. :-)

[oddrid]

Unghhghhhh so cuuuuuuuute ahhhhhh

[yminga]

I'm glad you think so!! And I definitively apologize for any fluff-induced cavities :D
Thanks a lot for taking the time to comment <3

[pink_bambi13]

Oh, this was gorgeous. I just loved the line, "who never apologized except with expertly-played violin sonatas." Really, such a sweet and delicious little fic. Loved it! <3

[yminga]

I'm so glad you picked on that line, it's my favourite as well :D
Your comment gave me such a big smile, really *thank you* for taking the time to review and thank you a thousand times for the truly lovely compliments!! <3

[horusguard76]

Beautiful. Love this introperspective into John's mind. Wonderful story. :)

[yminga]

Oh, I'm so glad you're saying this, you've no idea!! Because I don't know what exactly happened, but when I was reading the prompt I wanted to concentrate on John and Sherlock's budding relationship, and then as I start writing John decides he wants a character development piece o_O
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment!! :)

[horusguard76]

Oh, I know that feeling very well - when a character suddenly takes the reigns and a story just pours itself out. :D YAY! for inspiration! :)

You're very welcome. It was my pleasure.