Comments | ymorton: fic: that secret that you know, but don't know how to tell (part 3/3)

ymorton

fic: that secret that you know, but don't know how to tell (part 3/3)

Jan 14, 2011 13:30

fic: that secret that you know, but don't know how to tell (part 3/3)
fandom: the social network
pairing: mark/eduardo, noncon mark/sean
warning: this piece contains triggers for noncon. please, please read with caution. thank you!
notes: written for the tsn_kinkmeme prompt (an excerpt) : "Come on, Sean's every expression just screamed rape!face, and ( Read more... )

mark/eduardo, fic, the social network

Comments 19

twisting_fate9 January 15 2011, 14:07:45 UTC

lovely.

ymorton January 16 2011, 01:44:26 UTC

thank you so much for reading/commenting :)

learnthemusic January 16 2011, 01:33:53 UTC

Oh, my God, this is so ridiculously beautiful. It's such dark subject matter and you do it some great justice. Going through the denial and then guilt and the acceptance and just everything, and Mark handling it like I think he would. God, I mean, I wouldn't put it past movie!Sean doing something like this and then fucking things up even more without Mark even being able to get over what happened to him. I feel like you kept things well in character - and I know I'm babbling but I want to get everything down before I go crazy - with all the insistence and Eduardo's endless amount of "Hey's" and him going ballistic in protective fashion. And I love Lindsay's role, too, and that she was able to get over it quicker and more gracefully than Mark ( ... )

ymorton January 16 2011, 01:48:26 UTC

ohhh goddd thank you so much for this lovely comment. it is so kind and wonderful and i truly truly appreciate it. i especially appreciate that you think i kept it in character- i think mark is such a difficult personality to nail down, and i am so flattered that you think i was able to do that!!!

i'm so glad i was able to do the topic justice for you. it is extremely dark, and i felt a bit worried about it because it can be easy to gloss over certain issues and not stay true to the subject matter. thank you so so much!

iamadirtysecret January 16 2011, 06:39:24 UTC

FUCKING GOD, I LOVED IT. It's perfect, really.
And I'm sorry for not being able to do a decent commentary. :3

ymorton January 16 2011, 16:40:18 UTC

no, thank you so much! that was incredibly sweet :) i'm really glad you liked it!

leopardchic79 January 18 2011, 02:39:49 UTC

I really, really enjoyed this. You wrote it so well! And seriously...Sean is such an effing predator! Very awesome. :)

ymorton January 18 2011, 03:56:48 UTC

thank you!! i really appreciate it. and i KNOW, i can't think of sean the same now! which is dumb, because it is so so very completely untrue. god. haha :)

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ymorton January 26 2011, 06:25:05 UTC

oh thank you so much! i'm really glad you liked it.