fic: having trouble telling how i feel

Jan 18, 2011 01:02

fic: having trouble telling how i feel
fandom: the social network rpf
pairing: jesse/andrew (i feel ashamed a little bit)
notes: first RPF ever written. i blame these boys. and the fandom's collective tin hat. :D 
title is from lykke li's dance dance dance
oh and vaguely written for the exquisite tsn_kinkmeme prompt: "I'd love something about how much ( Read more... )

fic, the social network

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tafidadarling January 18 2011, 17:15:33 UTC
This is amazing. It's adorable and hot and that last line. Perfection! ♥

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ymorton January 18 2011, 22:09:05 UTC
aw thanks!! so glad you enjoyed!

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tafidadarling January 19 2011, 01:38:51 UTC
You're welcome! :)

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4rightchords_ January 18 2011, 17:42:38 UTC
god i love you, this is beautiful and sexy and hilarious

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ymorton January 18 2011, 22:09:22 UTC
thanks gurl!! <3

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zeraparker January 18 2011, 18:49:34 UTC
This is just gorgeous. Just so gorgeous. I love the last two paragraphs especially. They way your write neutoric Jesse's inner monologue and the metaphers are all so spot on, it's amazing!

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ymorton January 18 2011, 22:10:09 UTC
ohh thank you, i really appreciate that. because jesse's mind seems like the most frightening place to be, ever. boy is CRAAZY. i'm glad you enjoyed!!

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4rightchords_ January 19 2011, 07:50:27 UTC
GOD ONLY KNOWS HOW YOU JUMPED ON THIS BANDWAGON BUT I LOVE IT SO HARD

I LOVE YOUR JUMPING

I JUST WROTE "HUMPING" INSTEAD OF "JUMPING" THIS ISN'T OKAY

(yes i am leaving more feedback I FORGOT I LEFT FEEDBACK EARLIER OKAY)

the last line of this was my favorite. HILAR.

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ymorton January 19 2011, 15:38:53 UTC
HUMPING/JUMPING THAT IS VERY FREUDIAN CONSIDERING I WROTE PORN. I'LL TAKE IT AS A COMPLIMENT.

also, more feedback always good <3. gracias.

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fourtysteps January 19 2011, 11:58:46 UTC
WETGYJIKOERUWPKOFLDJHBUJILFD,JHYU89
THIS WAS LOVE. LOVE. LOVE!
<3
i would have more to add but i'm just asdyhbmkjfhbsjkdm incoherent oh my goodness this is beautiful gorgeous perfect <3 <3 <3

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ymorton January 19 2011, 15:39:20 UTC
oh thank you!!! heeee i love ajkdjakls comments. so glad you enjoyed!!!

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