Fic: Returning to Innocence

May 20, 2012 23:50

Fic: Returning to Innocence
Chapter: Found
Author: yogurtpo3

fanfiction, returning to innocence, himym

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toomanyprophets May 21 2012, 16:02:13 UTC
This is amazing! Heartbreaking, but amazing. I love the little moments where Ted notices how Robin is looking. Please write more!

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yogurtpo3 May 22 2012, 13:25:11 UTC
Aww, thanks! :)
And I'm glad you noticed Robin... I was trying to weave some B/R in there without being too obvious about it for now..haha..

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toomanyprophets May 22 2012, 15:53:22 UTC
Yeah, I thought you were. I don't think I could ever write a HIMYM fanfiction without putting some B/R in there somewhere!

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dreamsofspike May 21 2012, 19:26:11 UTC
oh man.... poor barney... i cant imagine what he went through, or who would have tortured him so brutally... but i've got such a bad feeling about the childhood trauma thing... him not wanting to say anything to the doctor, looking to ted for permission... brings up very disturbing images of a much younger barney in the hospital after a beating or something, being threatened into silence :(

this is definitely very dark and disturbing, but in a good way... brought me to tears a couple of times... definitely looking forward to more :)

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yogurtpo3 May 22 2012, 13:29:24 UTC
Haha, you're definitely in the right direction with the childhood thing... :) It should be revealed in another chapter or two!

Aww, I'm so happy you liked it! HIMYM Dark!fics are my favourite fics, so I was really keen on trying one out myself... it's kinda hilarious the number of dark fics we have dedicated to a fandom for a sitcom! XD

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lovelyshar May 22 2012, 15:55:08 UTC
Aw, this is so sad I just want to hug Barney it's such a tragic thing whatever happened to him it must've been really bad for him to end up that way. I feel bad for everyone in this it's so sad.

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yogurtpo3 July 24 2012, 11:37:45 UTC
Thanks for reviewing! I know it was a sad start.. hehe, but as they say, we only hurt those we love right?! XD

Oh, and the next chapter is finally up... I feel so slack... :P

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aperfectsong June 1 2012, 15:05:18 UTC
I want to know what's going on!

And I'm glad you managed to sneak some BR in there!

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yogurtpo3 July 24 2012, 11:39:07 UTC
Thanks! Having B/R in a fic in inevitable... lolz...
Next chapter is up, though only a short one this time!

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anonymous June 18 2012, 05:43:33 UTC
Aw! Poor Barney!
This is a really good idea... It'll be interesting to see how the group dynamics change. Glad you were able to add hints of BRo. Since Lily's already had lots of experience with five year olds, she can help Barney with adjusting. Update soon!
By the way, I love your icon.

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yogurtpo3 July 24 2012, 11:41:18 UTC
Thanks for the review! :) Yep, Lily's going to have a large role to play now that Barney is the way he is!

And re: my icon, aww... thanks! As soon as I saw the picture, I couldn't resist making an icon out of it! Neil is so cute! :P

Next chapter is finally up! It's only a short one though. Sorry about the wait!

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