Stalker

Oct 19, 2010 01:21

Length: Drabble
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst
A/N: Tired me can only write angst.  dbsk_flashfic challenge 108 # Detach

"He is staring at us" she states, pointing out the obvious.

"I know" he replies, trying to keep the irritation out of his voice.

"Why can't we get a restraining order?"

"I told you, it's complicated."

She sniffs unhappily and gives a surreptitious glance ( Read more... )

fic: stalker

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idioticvampyr October 19 2010, 08:27:29 UTC
ouch.. O.o

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sanchi7 October 19 2010, 08:28:55 UTC
I know :(

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sanchi7 October 19 2010, 15:58:11 UTC
I know with all the yoosu fluff in the air I ended up with angst D:

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xiahniste October 19 2010, 21:32:56 UTC
you killed me with just a drabble....*sniff*

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sanchi7 October 19 2010, 21:36:07 UTC
Eh don't cry who knows, Chun might dump that bitch of a wife and hook up with Su. :P

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xiahniste October 19 2010, 21:37:32 UTC
or he could just leave him all alone for us to comfort him...*has plans in mind*

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sanchi7 October 19 2010, 21:40:07 UTC
oohh yes yes yes as in plans with me works but if I have to share then he goes back to Chun ~ go to sleep girl!

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angelicxiah777 October 19 2010, 22:06:29 UTC
Aish, the last line killed me.

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sanchi7 October 21 2010, 01:44:25 UTC
Sometimes love hurts.

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tvfxq October 20 2010, 05:58:28 UTC
The last line was the cause of my death. So sad :'(

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sanchi7 October 21 2010, 01:43:51 UTC
Nah don't die baby go read happy YooSu! *hugs you*

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tvfxq October 21 2010, 04:49:56 UTC
Thanks, I think I will :)) oh! BTW, Yoo Chun has TWITTER! OMG!!!

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sanchi7 October 21 2010, 04:52:39 UTC
WHAT WHAT??? TELL ME TELL ME THE LINK QUICK!!!

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rumenes October 20 2010, 12:52:24 UTC
DDDDDDD: Last three lines were heartbreaking... T_T
So Junsu stalks Yoochun to force him to have sex with him?
And Yoochun only agrees to get Junsu off his back, and not because he loves Junsu the same way right? Poor Junsu, he must feel really horrible to go to that extent to be with Yoochun, even if it's just sex...

Very angsty, but that's my favourite genre... Angst is always full of emotions :)

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sanchi7 October 21 2010, 01:43:14 UTC
"So Junsu stalks Yoochun to force him to have sex with him?"

It's slightly more complicated. They used to be secret lovers, well it was sex from Yoochun's end but love from Su. Yoochun ended up marrying this girl but Su stalks him and follows them around. Yoochun thinks its just sex but what Junsu really wants is love. But he knows it is never going to happen,

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rumenes October 31 2010, 15:05:39 UTC
Oh man.... That's just... :( Poor Junsu, I really feel sorry for him. The worst part is that Yoochun will never know Junsu loves him and that it wasn't about lust to Junsu... D: Lovely story all the same. You managed to convey so much in such a short story length! :)

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