behind the front lines (prologue part b)

Oct 20, 2008 21:01


A young man was in hysteria
Shouting inaudibly, just a jumble of foreign words
It didn’t take long for blood loss to catch up with him 
He fell back against the make shift bed
I felt bad for him
We were both young and trapped in this war

I’ve lost count how many
have died in front of me
and these were the lucky ones

I wanted to clean the blood off my hands
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behind the front lines, dbsk, fanfiction, chaptered

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freya_xiah October 21 2008, 03:54:23 UTC
is this junsu?
i can not wait for the story ^^

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yoosu_ftw October 21 2008, 03:56:09 UTC
maybe =P
first chapter should be out in a few days ^^

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bvalkon October 21 2008, 04:44:32 UTC
It's horrible how war tears people apart mentally and physically ¬.¬ So much death and pain. *sighs* Looking back on the medicine back then, we really are fortunate these days to have so much at our disposal..I can't imagine living back then and treating a wounded soldier.

I'm still trying to figure out who is who though..I want to think this one is Yoochun, but then he might've been the first one because I see him as more of the combat type with Junsu being more of a doctor, so maybe this one was Junsu instead, but then they both have brothers and I WANT TO KNOW WHO'S WHO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o.O *twitches*

Keep up the great work~!!

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bvalkon October 21 2008, 04:44:56 UTC
O.O SECOND!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDD

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yoosu_ftw October 22 2008, 23:12:32 UTC
It's so aweful what these things do to people during and afterwards. It's amazing how fast medicine advanced, isnt it? Must have been unbearable for a doctor back then, though.

I'll reveal it in Chapter One, dont worry, haha~
If you look really closely, you can atleast tell who the soldier is. keke, there's a clue in there!!

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junji_stori October 23 2008, 03:50:39 UTC
this sounds exciting, but sad at the same time T-T
I'm looking forward to more! :D

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