Breathing..
Title: Breathing
Chapter: 1
Author: YoshiLei
Rating: PG 13, Language and very light hints of erotica
Band(s): Alice Nine
Pairing(s) Saga x Nao, although Saga doesn't make much of an appearance in this chapter.
Unbettaed im afraid so sorry for poor spelling D:
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I haven't seen a SagaxNao pairing in forever, and they are my OTP.. So I'm very excited to read the following chapters.
I like how you started out with a concert scene, and the fanservice made me laugh, but poor Nao-kun. He really loves Saga but he doesn't know. And he even brought a woman back. Oh that's just like a kick to the head. I want to know how Saga finds out about Nao's feelings.. if he ever does [he better D:]
I really hope you continue it, because I'm loving every bit of it, and you're very descriptive when you write, so pelase continue.
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Ehh, i know, i couldnt find any SagaxNao anywhere =-= .
I was just like ''What the hell? Nao is like the most adorable creature on the planet and Saga is basically a walking orgasm, who wouldnt want that paired off?!''
Ehh, i agree, oh Saga you oblivious, georgous fool.
Dx
Oh im glad you found it descriptive, i kept becoming convinced it wasnt enough, and then finding i thought it was dragging on for paragraphs when i was just trying to describe one feeling and would cut it back again...-//-
Anyway, i wasnt shore if i'd get any feed back for this, just one comment is enough to spur me on x33
So i'll be shore to upload soon, thanks for the comment. xx
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Ehh, im glad to see others pining for abit of SagaxNao apart from myself, there such an unbelievabley sweet pairing as far as im concerned and it sad to see so little fanfic with them.. DD<
Ahh, im planning on uploading another chapter soon
Thanks for the comment TT-TT
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