Sever

[yosso15]

Title: “Sever.”
Written by: Yosso
Rating: PG - 13
Feedback: Always appreciated, positive or negative, though constructive if you don’t mind? :).
Word Count: 1,394.
Characters: Tara, Faith.
Setting: During BtVS 4.16 “Who Are You?”
Challenge: KAX Challenge Three “What could have been…” from Veverka.
Disclaimer: The two girls are Joss' not mine

Comments

[not_purrrfect]

very very good

[yosso15]

Thanks :)

[anonymous]

Hi,
excellent stuff. I genuinely felt scared for Tara; also felt proud of her when she found the courage to fight back. I could actually imagine this as a scene from the show.

Ray (kerkevik@planet-save.com)

[yosso15]

Aw, thanks a lot for commenting, much appreciated! ;D