Comments | youcantseeus: Fic: Playing Nice

youcantseeus

Fic: Playing Nice

Nov 16, 2009 01:26

Title: Playing Nice ( Read more... )

wraeththu, cobweb, fanfiction, tyson, seel, swift, azriel, short fic

Comments 4

nivell November 16 2009, 08:12:00 UTC

Aww, this was so perfect..yeah, I wish that we could have had a little bit more insight into Tyson's and Azriel's childhood in the books but your version was pretty realistic. Loved it!

youcantseeus November 16 2009, 23:35:02 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, I always wanted to know more about Azriel and Tyson's childhood. I like to think there was a little sibling rivalry there (even though they aren't really siblings).

persephone100 November 16 2009, 17:03:01 UTC

I SO enjoyed this! I think you've captured the family dynamics at Forever perfectly and I really loved the characters' interactions and the way you tell the story from all their different points of view. I really like the last line by Tyson - it says it all! A delightful story!!

youcantseeus November 16 2009, 23:45:20 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I find the family dynamics at Forever interesting. I mean, you've got the resentment between Tyson and Seel and even a hint of resentment between Tyson and Azriel, I think. Then you've got Cobweb and Seel clashing and the fact that Swift was pretty young to be the head of the house and a parent at this point. And of course, Cal's ghost is always lurking around. Makes for a lot of good conflict.