Never done this before :/

Jul 19, 2009 22:03

So I suggest you start from the beginning (my journal isn't long) You'll notice my self progression. Review me. <3 [:

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shoebox2 July 20 2009, 04:33:07 UTC
To put it as tactfully as possible: there's nothing there to review. You haven't yet progressed to the point of actual content. Your own header not only suggests nobody would ever want to read 'this crap', but contains a typo in doing so.

Sounds like you use your journal as an outlet for things that confuse or worry you, which is fine. But actual writing requires at least some thought and care put into the composition (and yes, that includes grammar and spelling).

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gringo_in_tj July 20 2009, 04:37:42 UTC
Why can't anyone read the fucking rules before they apply in this community?

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Tact is my forte. phoenix_blade July 20 2009, 05:30:36 UTC
You can't write for shit.

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