Learning To Breathe: (14/?) (Harry/Louis; University Football!AU)

[youcomecrash]

Title: Learning To Breathe (14/?)
Word Count: 6,800
Summary: University Football!AU. How does your past fit into your present? Louis is still figuring it out.
Notes: I'm so sorry about the abrupt hiatus on this fic. I don't know how many of you know here on livejournal, but my mom lost her battle with cancer about a month ago, so I kind of dropped

Comments

[starlitshore]

Graaarrrghhhhhhhhh. *tears hair out*

I'm very sorry to hear about your loss. :(

[terriorbeaver]

beautiful, this whole story is phenomenal. i don't even know what to say, i just hope you do end up finishing it, but i would never want to make you feel guilty over it. there are more important things.

but either way, this has been so, so lovely so far. it might be my new favorite of all time, haha.

[queendanimal]

Wow i'm so sorry for your loss, I can't imagine how difficult it must be right now, i'm just so so sorry.

[youcomecrash]

oh god if i just printed all your reviews out and hung them up on the wall that wouldn't be weird right? RIGHT? Just, thank you for being awesome. Your reviews always make me really happy.

I feel like this whole thing started as a story about Harry and Louis and kind of morphed into this story about Louis and his life? I don't even know how this happened.

I think Louis thinks everyone will run away from him when things get tough because he himself has that intense urge to run whenever conflict arises, so he projects that onto other people. I'm so happy that you like all the layering and flaws to his character.

Ugh I love angst too when there's a payoff at the end. Hopefully by the time I wrap this up, the end will make up for all the depressing bits.

Thanks, as always, for your amazing feedback. :)

[its_a_deal]

i'm so, so sorry to hear about your mom. this was an amazingly heartbreaking chapter, and i'm just so sad for both of them. i can't wait to see what happens next though!