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youfadesofast

Sparks, Chapter Four

Jun 12, 2009 00:07

TITLE: Sparks
DISCLAIMER: I don't own GG.
RATING: PG - 13 (for now)
SHIP: Nate + Jenny of Gossip Girl
SUMMARY: I'm really bad with summaries. Basically, this is a multi-chaptered fic that will map out what I think NJ's storyline should be like in season three.

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sparks, fic: gg, nate/jenny

Comments 7

burstoflight June 12 2009, 05:21:10 UTC

OMFG this was so good I can barely comprehend it right now. *THUD* Truly, truly amazing. I loved it from start to finish. I loved how the Scott thing was handled and I loved the little Chuck/Blair we got. The depth you gave Nate was something the GG writers could only dream of. Just truly amazing. As far as I'm concerned this is Season 3 for me right here. I love that Nate is going to wait for Jenny. Dude needs to be single and Jenny needs to be able to land on her own two feet and make sense of everything. Nate should only be with Jenny when he's ready and vice versa.

I hope you bring the letter back because that is a huge thing I really want to be addressed.

I'll probably review again after I've read the chapter a few more times.

Update soon! :)

danielle_nj June 12 2009, 05:36:57 UTC

Wow. This is my favorite chapter yet! So amazing. We finally get insight into Nate! yayz.

I loved the party scene in general. It was great.

Will Jenny tell Rufus and Dan about Scott? I'm interested in seeing where that goes also.

But, man! Let's see if Nate is up for the challenge.

burstoflight June 12 2009, 08:10:52 UTC

So, I read it again and I noticed a slight continuity error. In the finale, Rufus/Jenny moved into the apartment. Is that something you're just ignoring or did you forget?

Please, please keep up the great work. I LOOOVE how Nate/Jenny ended up being together at the end of the chapter. *SIGH*

kbobcora June 12 2009, 14:41:34 UTC

Absolutely love LOVE LOVE this story!! If only you could write for the show!

gglover16 June 12 2009, 15:41:57 UTC

WOW! This chapter was great! I loved the Nate/Jenny at the end especially them doing calculus together that was SO cute and the part with the star! I'm glad you didn't make them rush into anything so they can both deal with their issues seperately and then deal with them together! Can't wait for another update! Going to go read the chapter again!