Sparks, Chapter Five

[youfadesofast]

TITLE: Sparks
DISCLAIMER: I don't own GG.
RATING: PG - 13 (for now)
SHIP: Nate + Jenny of Gossip Girl
SUMMARY: I'm really bad with summaries. Basically, this is a multi-chaptered fic that will map out what I think NJ's storyline should be like in season three.

Comments

[bassdorflover13]

That was great. I love your writing.
I think Scott should go jump off a bridge, though.
I loved the way you talked about how perfect Jenny is for Nate. I love it so much!
Definitely can't wait for another update!

[youfadesofast]

lol thanks! I kinda like scott though. hes so sexy looking! i really didn't want to paint him as a bad guy since that's what GG tends to do to its guest stars, but it's just so easy to.

[heavenlydamaged]

Awesome chapter!
You are so talented!
I can't wait for more!
♥

[youfadesofast]

thank you! im glad you liked it :)

[karencita03]

love it great chapter i felt so bad for Jenny with the whole Scott thing poor girl. I can't wait for another chapter.
PS-i voted for you

[youfadesofast]

thanks so much for reviewing and especially voting girl!

[burstoflight]

OMFG that was SOOO good! Seriously...it's like I don't even have words to describe it. It was perfect. I love the realization there. I love the way you describe the sparks between them, how Jenny was perfect for him, and how the fear was there for both of them.

I bet you're gonna mess all that up in the next chapter right? I still think Nate should suffer more. It's great in theory that he's changing, but he needs to be tested a little more IMHO.

Please please update soon! :)

[youfadesofast]

glad you liked it S. haha how do you think I'm gonna mess it up, and how would you like to see Nate suffer? it's always great to get suggestions.

[burstoflight]

How about Nate and Jenny arrange to meet somewhere and he's finally going to tell her how he feels about her (maybe give her the letter...IDK what your plans are for that), but then Jenny gets spooked because of what happened last time due to some Gossip Girl post or something Dan (or someone) says like (you guys are spending alot of time together lately...I hope you're not getting too attached because you know what happened last time blah blah blah) and ends up blowing him off...and then starts dating alot...all guys the opposite of Nate and it really, really hurts him...so much he cries!

ETA: And maybe Nate starts thinking what's the point of changing if he can't ever have Jenny so he starts to fall back on bad habits until someone gives him a talking to. IDK who. But they tell Nate that he shouldn't throw it all away because of some momentary setback and that the best thing he can do is fight for her...but also give her space...just be true to his word. Get the trust again.

[isisizabel]

FABULOUS! Sheer genius the way you mentioned how easily Jenny can fit into both worlds. Blair is all about the purity of the UES, and Vanessa is too busy finding something to bitch about the UES. Jenny knows how to balance the UES and Brooklyn like a champ.

[youfadesofast]

thanks iz! now that ive published a chapter, i believe YOU have to as well!

[burstoflight]

^ THIS!