Sparks, Chapter Six

[youfadesofast]

TITLE: Sparks
DISCLAIMER: I don't own GG.
RATING: PG - 13 (for now)
SHIP: Nate + Jenny of Gossip Girl
SUMMARY: I'm really bad with summaries. Basically, this is a multi-chaptered fic that will map out what I think NJ's storyline should be like in season three.

Comments

[dbpchick]

AWWWWW!!!

So freaking amazing. Though I had to laugh when Nate told Jenny she was the one he wants

and

EVIL cliffhanger!! Very evil

Who died??

[youfadesofast]

lol why'd you laugh!

i dunnoooooo *shifty eyes*
okay, i'll tell you who died.
it's... it's.....

oh man, i think my laptop's going to die. maybe later. :P

jk. you'll find out next chapter!

[burstoflight]

Were they murdered or did they just die?

[youfadesofast]

that's a great question s!

[burstoflight]

OMFG this was AMAZING! I absolutely loved how you wrote their reunion. I loved Nate's speech to her and even though I think Jenny should have given him a harder time, I couldn't help but squee and sigh.

I'm also glad they didn't have sex yet cause that would have been too much too soon (especially in light of the cliffhanger). I love that Jenny wanted to though. Heh.

Vanessa was very annoying. GAH I wish she would go away. Scott is a much more interesting character tbh and I enjoy how you write him.

Now that was an evil cliffhanger! Who died?!!? And how will it break them apart?!?!

[youfadesofast]

if they were to pursue nj in the show i'd totally love if it nate refused to have sex with her! i know they probably won't do that though, but i'd love it if they did. so i figured i'd just put it in the fic here.

i really tried to put insight and understanding in vanessa's character but i just can't. she makes me vomit. ugh. but anyway i'm glad you like it. i have no clue who's going to die... *shifty eyes* or do i?

[burstoflight]

I think that would be amazing if that happened. But this show doesn't believe in organic drama. LOL.

and LMFAO.

[jellibeen92]

Oh man just when they're happy! I have a strong feeling it's Vanessa or Scott! Oh please don't tear them apart. Their so happy now!

This was another incredible update!
I love how Nate was speechless and Chuck kept showing up to snap him out of it. I'm glad Nate finally told Vanessa they were done. Oh and Scott showing up was a big twist that I honestly didn't see coming.

Just that moment between Jenny and Nate where she heard his foot hit the gravel, intense.

"just Jenny and Nate and Nate and Jenny as Blair would say" that was just...thud....

Nate's whole speech about why they should be together and how he would wait and fight for her was, i couldn't have pictured it better myself. And When Jenny asked why he was holding back with her and he just said because...thud....yet again

You really amaze me and I love this series! Update soon!

[youfadesofast]

first off i love your awesome and lengthy review! it really helps me a lot to know what specifically people like or don't like. i'll try my best to update asap!

[danielle_nj]

Dalal, this was perfect! I love how N and J both rejected the "easy" options in order to be with each other.

What an evil, sneaky cliffhanger that was! Who died? Cannot wait for the next chapter.

[youfadesofast]

i won't tell you who died but i can guarantee that the next chapter will make some people cry!

[bookmusicalover]

Okay so I am completly lovin the whole first real kiss as a couple on a boat, very original and very romantic.

That cliffhanger is evil and mean, hopefully NJ can pull together.

[youfadesofast]

im glad you liked the kiss! for some reason scenery really matters to me when people kiss. it has to be easy to visualize and beautiful.