Comments | youfadesofast: Sparks, Chapter Nine

youfadesofast

Sparks, Chapter Nine

Jun 29, 2009 17:31

TITLE: Sparks
DISCLAIMER: I don't own GG.
RATING: PG - 13 (for now)
SHIP: Nate + Jenny of Gossip Girl
SUMMARY: I'm really bad with summaries. Basically, this is a multi-chaptered fic that will map out what I think NJ's storyline should be like in season three.

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sparks, fic: gg, nate/jenny

Comments 16

gglover16 June 29 2009, 22:53:31 UTC

Yay and update!

Wow this was really good! I love how everyone is worried about Jenny. I hope to see this kind of friendship between Jenny and everyone next season. I also liked the way you portrayed Dan he actually seemed to realize what was going on in Jenny's life. I hope we are getting one step closer to Jenny cracking I can't wait!

youfadesofast June 30 2009, 00:59:12 UTC

yeah i really hope they wont isolate jenny next season =[ theres about 4-5 chapters of the story left so it'll come soon!

naturellebella June 29 2009, 22:55:12 UTC

Dan blinked. "Like a Mastercard?"

"A certain card you carry in your back pocket...
lol I actually heard Dan\Penn saying that! too funny. I like the added addition of this, it's interesting!

Great chapter even though I want Jenny to just thaw out already :P omgosh, imagine Taylor playing this though? She'd be perfection!

youfadesofast June 30 2009, 01:00:06 UTC

lol im glad you liked it kem! thank you for reviewing!

gonebananas13 June 30 2009, 02:01:20 UTC

awww im glad somehow nate was able to talk to jenny somehow and not do do something she will regret for life.

youfadesofast June 30 2009, 16:41:48 UTC

thanks! glad you liked it!

burstoflight June 30 2009, 04:19:34 UTC

This is such a heartbreaking chapter. Jenny is so lost. She needs to confide her feelings in someone soon. If she can't do it with her family or friends, then maybe she should talk to a therapist. I'm surprised Headmistress Queller hasn't noticed anything yet. She's nosy too. LOL.

I really loved how you had Dan and Nate made up and I even like the NS interaction. They make great friends.

I just feel so bad for Jenny, I want to hug her. She's so lost and hurt and sad. :(

Please, please update soon!!!

youfadesofast June 30 2009, 16:42:29 UTC

lol!
im glad you liked the DNS.
ill try to update as soon as possible! chapter ten should be easier... hopefully.

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youfadesofast June 30 2009, 16:43:40 UTC

aw thanks!
lol there's actually only four or five chapters left =[ i hope you'll like the way the story ends as well!