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youfadesofast

Sparks, Chapter Ten

Jul 01, 2009 22:32

TITLE: Sparks
DISCLAIMER: I don't own GG.
RATING: PG - 13 (for now)
SHIP: Nate + Jenny of Gossip Girl
SUMMARY: I'm really bad with summaries. Basically, this is a multi-chaptered fic that will map out what I think NJ's storyline should be like in season three.

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sparks, fic: gg, nate/jenny

Comments 12

bassdorflover13 July 2 2009, 03:50:30 UTC

eeeekk!! I loved it! Your writing ice cold J so well. This chapter was amazing and I definitely cannot wait for more!

youfadesofast July 2 2009, 18:35:24 UTC

thank you!

burstoflight July 2 2009, 05:17:25 UTC

Wow that was amazing! I love how Jenny is struggling to keep up her icy visage around Nate. Their encounter on the stairs was hot.

I also love how Jenny was dealing with Emma.

"Now move down a step, do you mind? You're a little too close for my taste."

^ LOVE THAT! HEHEHE

I also love how Nate isn't really leaving her alone. Him stalking her is always hot. HEHEHE

My heart broke at the end for these two.

Can't wait to see what else you have planned!

Update soon!

youfadesofast July 2 2009, 18:36:18 UTC

lol im glad you liked it. idk if anyone caught on but in the first season blair told jenny (or serena?) to scoot down a step, so jenny's kind of echoing blair there.

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youfadesofast July 2 2009, 18:37:39 UTC

i can never seem to write the happy stories well! but i can guarantee that this story will end happily :D

id like to write more stories, but they usually end up as one shots. im not very good with multi chaptered fics, but the support from all of you at fanforum really helps!

noldinaa July 2 2009, 08:55:39 UTC

That was amazing! And I'm so happy you updated before I leave for France tomorrow :) !

I love the way you write Jenny and how she's having a hard time being cold around Nate. And I loved the tension between them. The ending was so sad.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

youfadesofast July 2 2009, 18:38:29 UTC

have a great time in france girl! lucky you. i am envious. and thank you for the review!

gonebananas13 July 2 2009, 19:32:47 UTC

wow jenny sure is good at playing the ice queen role and wow for a moment there u had me thinking wow maybe jenny is really going to give into Nate when it seemed like he was going to kiss her but damn it didn't happen i do hope they do have a happy moment :)

youfadesofast July 2 2009, 21:58:21 UTC

the next few chapters will have bittersweet moments but i assure you the ending will be happy!