Sparks, Chapter Eleven

[youfadesofast]

TITLE: Sparks
DISCLAIMER: I don't own GG.
RATING: PG - 13
SHIP: Nate + Jenny of Gossip Girl
SUMMARY: I'm really bad with summaries. Basically, this is a multi-chaptered fic that will map out what I think NJ's storyline should be like in season three.

Comments

[kellou24]

Great chapter! I love that he gave Jenny the ring. They need to get back together. Update soon:)

[youfadesofast]

glad you liked it! i'll try my best to update asap.

[youfadesofast]

aw, thanks!

[burstoflight]

AMAZING!

I'll leave a more detailed review after I get some sleep. I just wanted to say something now though!

[youfadesofast]

alright, thank you S! i always look forward to your reviews the most :D

[burstoflight]

Alright, so I read it a couple more times. I really like how you had Blair talk to Nate about not giving up. Their scene was really cute and true to their relationship. I love how everyone is trying to help him win over Jenny even if it's just the smallest of details. I love how Scott is so close to everyone else and that he's helping out too.

I also LOVE how vulnerable Jenny was at the end with Nate and how now he finally understands what he's dealing with here. I love how he gave her his mom's ring too. Awww.

Now watch you go screw it all up. I know how evil you can be! :P

Update soon!

[paireinlove]

That was so beautiful. I recently founded this story and oh my i love it! lol.
Its my first N/J serial fic that i've followed and i dont want it to finish :[ lol
Update soon ;]

[youfadesofast]

i am glad you like the story! i dont want it to end soon either... i've had so much fun with it! i hope you'll enjoy what's left of it.

[gglover16]

I loved all the little details everyone was texting Nate they were so random and cute! I also love how everyone including Dan is in on getting Nate and Jenny together.

I love the effect Nate has on Jenny but I also feel bad for her because I could not imagine one person having that much of a hold over my emotions.

Oh okay and last but not least the ring. That was so cute! I love how Nate was just begging her take it and I love how Jenny was honest with Nate. Now he knows what he's working with so he can break down Jenny's walls that much faster.

I can't believe we only have 3 or 4 chapters left that makes me really sad because I have become so attached to this story it is truly amazing and I'm sad to see it ending. Can't wait to cry and smile at the next update!

[youfadesofast]

yay thanks for everything you've said in your review! i like reviews that go into detail, they really help. i'll give you a spoiler and tell you that the next two chapters will make you cry :P

[gglover16]

Happy tears or sad tears?

[youfadesofast]

sad :D