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youfadesofast

Sparks, Chapter Fourteen

Jul 17, 2009 00:07

TITLE: Sparks
DISCLAIMER: I don't own GG.
RATING: PG - 13
SHIP: Nate + Jenny of Gossip Girl
SUMMARY: I'm really bad with summaries. Basically, this is a multi-chaptered fic that will map out what I think NJ's storyline should be like in season three.

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sparks, fic: gg, nate/jenny

Comments 26

danielle_nj July 17 2009, 10:14:03 UTC

This truly was the perfect ending. I love how you wrote NJ in the rain scene. They were hesitant and a bit nervous/scared. Especially Nate which I found adorable. I also loved when Jenny touches Nate's cheek. These subtle little things were what made the scene seem real. I think the last chapter was so heartbreaking that many couldn't comment. I'd like to comment on the fic as a whole since this is the final chapter ( ... )

youfadesofast July 17 2009, 15:15:14 UTC

dude first off i love reviews like this. thank you for writing it ( ... )

sarzworld July 17 2009, 11:21:37 UTC

LOOOOOVEEEEE IT.

I loved the fact that Dan still is not used to them x]
I loved the way you made him come back and the way she didn't want to remember him.
And I love the ending.
So perfect!

youfadesofast July 17 2009, 15:16:02 UTC

thank you! haha i couldn't resist sticking in an uncomfortable dan. I'm so glad you loved it!

twisting_fate9 July 17 2009, 13:22:36 UTC

awwi loved it.
i always loved this story and pray this is how season 3 goes down.
xD

youfadesofast July 17 2009, 15:16:40 UTC

i hope s3 goes like this too. i'll be disappointed if it doesnt lol - thank you!

jellibeen92 July 17 2009, 16:41:10 UTC

Are you trying to kill me with happiness because I'm really freaking happy right now. It was so unbelievable. It was amazing way to end it and I started totally tearing up during it. It doesn't help that I had a really heart breaking song on while reading it and gosh this was amazing!

youfadesofast July 17 2009, 20:26:30 UTC

haha no im not trying to kill you! i'm so glad you liked it!! thank you so much.

gglover16 July 17 2009, 18:01:35 UTC

Wow I am at a loss for words yet again! I mean that was the perfect ending to a perfect story. The fact that you had them kiss in the rain was absolutely perfect! I love that Nate healed her and that she read the letter and the fact that Nate's mom was part of getting them together even if it was a small part.

I am truly sad that this story is ending! This fic uplifted me when my NJ spirits were down lol. This is one of the best fics written for NJ I really hope that you do a sequel or write another NJ fic. I'm really going to miss this fic so if you did a sequel then you would be helping my mental health because I think I would so insane without more of your NJ fics to read :)

youfadesofast July 17 2009, 20:31:03 UTC

aw thank you so much. you know i didnt think about nate healing her until you mentioned it; im glad he has though, otherwise i'd feel bad that scott could fix her while nate couldn't.

i will definitely write another NJ fic in the future. i dont know about a sequel because sequels are risky, but i am rather fond of one shots :)