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youfadesofast

A Promise Made

Jul 24, 2009 01:25

TITLE: A Promise MadeDISCLAIMER: I don't own GG.
RATING: PG - 13
SHIP: Nate + Jenny of Gossip Girl
WORD COUNT: 713 words.
SUMMARY: Short story about Jenny's 18th birthday.

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fic: gg, a promise made, nate/jenny

Comments 26

burstoflight July 24 2009, 05:51:23 UTC

AMAZING! BEAUTIFUL! <3

Exactly how I picture their first time. Sweet and Sensual. SO THEM!

I'm so happy you're writing again. I miss Sparks!

Any chance you can write another drabble about the morning after? ;)

youfadesofast July 24 2009, 05:56:04 UTC

we'll see. i was gonna include the morning after in this but honestly i just imagine her leaving him a note on the pillow, lol

burstoflight July 25 2009, 06:00:56 UTC

I could actually see that too. LOL.

youfadesofast July 24 2009, 05:57:03 UTC

and to be honest, i miss sparks too!

naturellebella July 24 2009, 06:20:32 UTC

HOT DOG ICE CREAM!!!! See, ice cream leads to the best scenes Dalal, I love it. I want more :( lol more NJ fics from you!

youfadesofast July 24 2009, 16:09:36 UTC

lmao thanks kem! im glad you liked it!

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youfadesofast July 24 2009, 16:11:00 UTC

thanks chloe! i kind of wanted to imply that some feelings were there, but i think the friendship aspect may have overpowered that. anyway it's open to interpretation so if the reader wants feelings behind it, there sure can be, and the opposite holds true as well.

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youfadesofast July 24 2009, 16:13:16 UTC

thank you lovely! to be honest this actually isnt how i'd want her to lose in on the show. but i definitely do want her to lose it to nate.

xnarchix July 24 2009, 10:17:29 UTC

I totally love the story :D i really hope that'll happen on her 18th birthday ;) And i love the Twister idea ♥

youfadesofast July 24 2009, 16:14:30 UTC

thank you!