눈을 감고 그댈 그려요 [HyoSica, R]

[dalpaengee]

Title: 눈을 감고 그댈 그려요
Pairing: HyoSica
Rating: R
Summary: Hyoyeon's finger tips on her skin are like flower petals on water, drifting around aimlessly.
Note: started/ended 09.13.09. Written for galaxmi. ♥

Comments

[keychains]

[dalpaengee]

[dalpaengee]

just kidding i love you ^___________________________^

[prim8]

WOW.
yeah...just WOW

[dalpaengee]

haha thanks ^^

[darkaslay]

Your choice of music + this = movie worthy.

It was like some classic love scene from a movie lol. Very hot, but nothing porny; right amount of everything.

[dalpaengee]

Aww thanks so much! I'm glad you like it :)

[just_keep_on]

Oh wow.

First, I read this without listening to the linked song but even without knowing what music you had intended to be in the background, this piece conveyed on its own a quiet, loving scene. (I of course need to ask where this song is from because omg, so pretty!)

Second and most of all, I really liked this~ HyoSica isn't a pairing I've seen a lot of fics for and whenever I think of this pairing, I think of them being quiet and sweet like this. I like how you had Sica noting a lot of Hyoyeon's contradictions and the great amount of tenderness in both their actions. Really really nice <333

Thanks for sharing!

[dalpaengee]

Thanks! This is such a good comment, lol. ^^ I'm so glad you liked it. The song is from Goo Hyesun's album, actuaally. All of the songs are really great, really pretty.

[jenluvskat]

First off, excellently written. It has such a calming yet erotic vibe to it without sounding "trashy." I'm not sure what word to use but fics like this aren't so well written sometimes.

HyoSica is my first OTP, and while I've left it behind, it's like one of those secret cravings you have and I like reading fics written about this pairing, whether it has sex or not.

I like the fact that it was Hyoyeon who was taking the lead, as in she was the one doing things to Jessica, because I can't see Jessica being the aggressive one in this relationship. Not that Hyoyeon is technically super aggressive or anything.

To make short and simple, I loved it ♥

[dalpaengee]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it and comments like these are always awesome to get. :) I'm really happy it came across not in a trashy way, since I wanted it to have a sort of understated and quiet feel. Thanks for the comment!