Sylar- The Demon Wathcmaker Of Queens (3/4)

[youngsaavik]

Molly was packing when suddenly her bedroom door was burst open.

“Sir!” she yelled, trying in vain to hid the bag from Bob and Thompson. “A gentleman knocks before entering a lady´s room!”.

“I see no lady” her guardian answered coldly, staring at her packed up clothes. “I couldn´t believe when I heard. I was sure he was lying. I thought my dear Molly

Comments

[levitatethis]

Poor Lyle....always forgotten or just ignored...and now he's being thrust into the middle of the disturbing truth about those meatpies!

Since you had mentioned possibly changing things up with the ending (considering the ending of "Sweeny Todd") I'm curious to read your last chapter.

Good job!

[youngsaavik]

Thanks! I had some trouble to decide wheater or not to keep the original end. I hope I made an interesting choice. I´m going to write the last chapter now.

[poemwithnorhyme]

Aww, this is just great. But, the image of you know who (just in case someone reads this who hasn't seen the movie) singing "“Smoke, smoke. Sign of the devil, sign of the devil. City on fiiiire…. Witch, witch! Quick, sir, run and tell. City on fire. Mischief." is the best image ever XD! Wonderful! Can't wait for the last chapter, ^_^

[youngsaavik]

LOL. Yeah, but I felt sorry for this person... Being throwed at the street by Lyle and everything. XD