Sylar- The Demon Watchmaker of Queens

[youngsaavik]

“I have sailed the world, beheld it´s wonders

From the Dardanelles

To the mountains of Peru

But there´s no place like New York…”

“No, there´s no place like New York…”

“Mr. Sylar?”

“You´re young, Micah… Life has been kind to you”

“Well, actually… Hum, you really don´t want to hear about my mom”

“I doubt it´s as tragic as the story I have to tell”

“I´m sure

Comments

[furius]

I *hear* this in my head. Do continue. I love it. It fits splendidly. I wondered for a moment if it was going to be Matt who took Mohinder away, but Bob's much more suitable really. And as a plus, there could be Elle.

[youngsaavik]

Thanks! A lot of possible Judges Taupin crossed my mind, but Bob was definetely the most fitting. I really, really wanted to put Elle on the story, but couldn´t figure how. She´s not evil, so she couldn´t be the beadle. And if she was simply Bob´s daughter, I´d have to create a whole relationship between her and Molly, probably have her struggling against telling her "sister" the truth, etc. So I cut her off. =/

[poemwithnorhyme]

Ohh, I absolutely adore this! I would have written it if I could, but I think you did a much better job than I ever could. I want to see the rest (even if I already know the ending, XD). The characters are perfect! Bob and Thompson, Stupid Maya, Lyle, Petrelli's Miracle Elixir....So good ^_^

"...He put curare on his Chai” <-- That sucks, XD. Poor boy.

Wonderful! Just a bit of constructive criticism, you should spread out the paragraphs a bit more, gets a bit hard to read. Put spaces between paragraphs, it'd make it easier ^^

[youngsaavik]

Wow! That really means a lot, considering I´m a huge fan of your writing. ^^

Yeah, poor Mohinder. XD Should have used regular pure poison, but I couldn´t resist. I pratically ship chai/curare.

Thanks so much for the advice!

[poemwithnorhyme]

Chai/Curare FTW! XD! I'm mostly replying back because of the 'fan' thing, I just want to let you know I'm truly honored and flattered by that. *beams* Thank you so much!

I look forward to the next chapter, and great job with the lyrics by the way! ^_^

[levitatethis]

This is a wonderfully written version of "Sweeney Todd"! I can actually picture all of these characters as well as hear them. I look forward to your next chapter!

[youngsaavik]

Thanks! I´m so glad you can hear them. =) I was afraid that with some of the cuts on the lyrics, it would look silly.