Sylar-The Demon Watchmaker of Queens (2/?)

[youngsaavik]

“Where´s Thompson?!?!? He said he´d be here by the end of the week!”

“And it´s still Tuesday! Why can´t you relax a bit? Wait! Think of something else for a while! I´ve been thinking about putting some flowers here…”

Maya stopped talking immediately when she peaked through the window.

“Sylar… It´s Peter Petrelli. What´s he doing here?”

“I don´t know…

Comments

[levitatethis]

I'm really looking forward to your next chapter...who knew "Heroes" could lend itself this well to "Sweeney Todd"? Although knowing how "Sweeney Todd" ends and considering the Mylar roles here...I guess I should be prepared now

[youngsaavik]

Well... I actually haven´t decided yet. I want to be loyal to the end, but I don´t know if I´ll have the courage.

Glad you like it! That part was too good to not be adaptated.
And oooops... I´ve just noticed, a "judge" slipped there, where it should be Midas. I copied the lyric while to make it easier... "runs to correct*. Thanks, if you hadn´t quoted that I would never had noticed.

[poemwithnorhyme]

Oh this was just great! *is very happy* I love just how Heroes-esque it is! So good, ^_^ And I really can see them singing that, hearing Sylar singing "My Epiphany" and "A Little Priest" just makes me so happy..

“Perhaps not. But he at least knows I exist. Different from my family… My father only cares for my older sister, and neither of us had photos exposed around the house, because all space was took by my mom´s dog”. <--XD, the story of Lyle's life!

"..Try a little painter. It had just been out of rehab. So it´s pretty fresh.
“Haven´t you got cheerleader or something like that?”
“Now, you see, the trouble with cheerleader is how do you know it´s deceased. <---LOL! These just made me laugh so friggin' hard...and they're true! Even the 'deceased' part!

Just a few grammar problems:
"...He was the only one who repeated my pies after times got so hard, God bless him”. <--repeated? o.o

"...if you get my trift" <--This should be 'drift', shouldn't it?

[youngsaavik]

Yeah, me too. ^^ I haven´t been able to take the image out of my mind since Zach said he´d like to play Sweeney when he´s older, so this entire fic is actually his fault. *Hugs him*.

Poor, poor Lyle...

LOL, I know how you feel. I was thinking so hard of what to do with this part, Claire´s autopsy popped into my head, I sang it and started laughing. I was at the bus stop, and people stared. XD

Thanks! Have corrected. =)

[postal152]

Yay, you did it! Haha, this fits perfectly, I laughed out loud when I read the part with Petrelli's miracle elixir, even though I knew it was coming. xD

I applaud you for taking on this noble task. :D

[youngsaavik]

Thanks! I´m having a great time writing it. :D