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Aug 09, 2004 23:20

we remain prisoned by
the tired act of envy,
the sea the sky who smiles
with stars in her eyes,
and the sky the sea who sleeps
flowing free. but the truth is
even the most distant shall
embrace, watch the horizon,
where smiles begin their grace.

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an_autumn_end August 9 2004, 22:21:17 UTC
you are on tonight. probably the first things longer than 3 lines that i've been pretty impressed by. especially the parentheses thing. i liked that. of course you know i'm going to want a full explanation later.

p.s. i hugged justin-pierre for you.

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deceptivfallacy August 10 2004, 13:02:08 UTC
beautiful.
as always.

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