Brain Trust

[youvebeenpixied]

Naturally Balanced and Strong Wellness
Naturally Balanced and Strong Coaching
Naturally Balanced and Strong Health Coaching

Naturally in Balance and Strong... Thoughts?

Comments

[missionista]

I think all of these are trying to fit too much information into a small space. How aboutsomething like:

Balance & Strength Coaching
(centered & smaller underneath) Health & life coaching the natural way

[youvebeenpixied]

I like where you are going, but "Strength Coach" is not what I was going for. I was thinking strong as in mentally and physically.

[chapstickqueen]

I read 'naturrally balanced and strong" followed by anything as to more like a nutriotionist or naturopath...which isn't quite what you're going for...correct?

[youvebeenpixied]

It actually is. Nutrion, workouts, personal balance; it all fits into what I am doing.

[chapstickqueen]

Ah! In that case, I like Naturally Balanced and Strong Wellness best.

[awfief]

I like "Natural Balance, Strong Wellness"

[beah]

These all make it sound like "Strong" is your name... What about "Natural Balance Health and Wellness Coaching"?

[youvebeenpixied]

Really? I didn't read that at all. Interesting. I really like NBS because I would like to come at it from the No BS angle. NBHWC is kind of long. I just don't know!

[naiad]

I think these options don't convey what you're going for because the "and" breaks it into the wrong 2 parts:

Naturally Balanced
and
Strong Coaching

so it ends up sounding like strength coaching despite your intent (or like you are a strong coach). Also, when read as those two parts (which I do for all four of your options listed), they don't really parse: you're coaching naturally balanced and strong. . . what?

Wow, this sounds more negative than I meant. I'd better come up with a solution and not just problems! Um . . . um . . .

Personal Balance and Natural Wellness ?
Natural Wellness, Strength, and Balance ?
Natural Wellness and Balance ?
Natural Wellness and Life Balance? (I'm not so crazy about this one)

Maybe leave the word coach out entirely.

And go you for embarking on your own venture like this!

[sihaya09]

I think these options don't convey what you're going for because the "and" breaks it into the wrong 2 parts:

Naturally Balanced
and
Strong Coaching

Yeah, I agree.

[youvebeenpixied]

All good points. Even if it wasn't meant as so, negative feedback is perfectly acceptable! I need to know how people read the words. Just because I see it one way, doesn't mean it's the only way!

Thank you very much! I am scared and excited :)

[sihaya09]

Anything with "Strong Wellness" sounds like bad grammar.

I would say "Naturally Balanced and Strong Coaching" is best of those three, but it's still a bit wordy. How attached are you to "Strong"? 'Cause "Naturally Balanced Health Coaching" sounds good to me.

[youvebeenpixied]

Not overly attached, but I am trying to keep the NBS Something-or-other.