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Feb 08, 2010 10:55



pt 2 )

shinee, fanfic

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yuei_vuisaki February 8 2010, 04:05:19 UTC
spot for dongsaeng bunni102 sooyoung saranghae ♥

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bunni102 February 8 2010, 23:17:17 UTC
*tackes with hugs and kisses* ♥ OMG, I FREAKING LOVE YOU SO MUCH UNNIE~ ♥_♥

Like seriously this must be the best JongYu fic I ever read in my life. I mean you don't get JongYu smut nowadays. Like you never do. That makes you the first then

I mean you never get JongYu like this. Its so amazing. So smutty and hot. I think I died so many times reading this fic. I lost lots of blood reading this too. Like I had a few massive nosebleeds readin this. I almost use abo4t half of a whole tissue box.

OMG, HOY $!_$!FA$r1@#$_!!!! IT IS ACTUALLY JONGYU!!! Like Jonghyun x Onew. AS IN JONGHYUN IS THE ONE THAT TOPS!!! TO!U#T)!UTU)&!&T%)&!)%) I can now finally die in peace ( ... )

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bunni102 February 8 2010, 23:18:15 UTC
HAHAHA, I love how you put in that Jong had to go online to do some research about gay porn. Even though that is so funny I thought it was cute too. I mean he didn't want to hurt Onew since it was his, well their first time ever doing something like that. I can tell that he really cared too since he even call Key for help. I mean come on, he called Key. That explains a lot right there, he has to be pretty desparate to call Key ( ... )

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yuei_vuisaki February 9 2010, 03:09:31 UTC
Oh LOL sooyoung ♥

yes, that unbelieveable part... it's meant to be like kang hodong, BAHAHAHA glad u caught it, u're so smart XD

omo, Jong is the uke? LOL, my mistake, mianhae XD
it's just i watched HI BB! too much and jinki's awkwardness was CUTE nad screamed UKE... and LOL, in my head, Jong was really BAMF and onew just too innocent XDD

I watched Bo Peep too much -_-;; LOL

and it's not like i stayed up late, my MUSE, my DAMN MUSE want me to write at night, for some unknown reason, i can only write at night...and the PLOT BUNNY didnt help either -.,-

glad u like it BB ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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yuei_vuisaki February 8 2010, 04:07:43 UTC
spot for unnie meggayi and prickilla thank you bbs ♥

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prickilla February 8 2010, 05:45:06 UTC
MUAHAHAHHA /obnoxious laughter
I was worried my email screwed up again :O!

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yuei_vuisaki February 9 2010, 03:10:05 UTC
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

you help me so much with my engrish-ness XD ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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prickilla February 9 2010, 14:29:37 UTC
ITS FUN :D
and it keeps me off trying to drive my brain into overload trying to write fics myself :)
but nothing comes to mind unless i sit my ass down and force myself anywayyy. @_@

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yuei_vuisaki February 8 2010, 04:09:28 UTC
spot for whoever wants this spot ^^ i love you for reading my fics ♥

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crazylilazngirl June 11 2010, 06:25:37 UTC
I WANT THIS SPOT :|D
I'm like UBER UBER UBER late.. but that's okay :)
this is like the only good Jongyu out there D|:

“O-Onyu c-can only c-choose one p-person t-to m-make love w-with. I-If Onyu fails, O-Onyu… O-Onyu d-doesn’t know w-what will h-happen. They s-said s-something bad will h-happen if Onyu failed,” he stammered pitifully between hiccups and sobs.
//squealing :|D
soo cute :)

“It hurts, but nothing lasts forever... except my love for you,” Jonghyun said sweetly as he pecked Jinki's lips.
//dies of corniness
I didn't know Jonghyun was capable of being this corny XDD
//laughing inside really hard...ly?
XD

“He’s so cute, can I borrow him sometimes?”
Key just wants a threesome with them :|D

“Aww... I really liked that tail!” Jonghyun pouted.
Jonghyun has a kink for tails?
like a toy kink
//gets shot

:|D
I haven't left such a long comment in a while :|3

Thank you for sharing :|3

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yuei_vuisaki June 26 2010, 02:55:31 UTC
LOL THANK YOU
glad you like it XD
and thank you for commenting, this comment made me feel the luuurrrvveee XDDD

yay for JongYu XDD

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chinagirl4evr February 8 2010, 04:51:51 UTC
I love it ! It was sweet and hot! I think I have a cat-boy fetish and Onew is just too ADORABLE! Jongyu is really becoming hot now. I don't care who Onew is with. I pimp him out to anyone. He needs lots of love

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yuei_vuisaki February 9 2010, 03:12:05 UTC
LOL, ONEW LOVERS HIIIIIIIII ♥

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aaliyah_babygul February 8 2010, 09:43:06 UTC
Oh man, that was really sweet. I fucking blushed when they were having sex. Pure mindfuck :)

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yuei_vuisaki February 9 2010, 03:12:58 UTC
AHAHAH, mindfuck is my hobby, i do it on daily basis
thank you bb ♥

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