· Snow·Powder · ONESHOT

[yujira]

Title : Snow Powder
Author : yujira
Pairing : implied Reita x Ruki
Genre : angst, drama
Rating : PG-13
Summary : The brunette felt his eyes slowly closing.He wanted to believe those words.
                     Reita had never lied to him before.
                     And he wouldn't do now. He was here. It was alright.
Warning : my first try at writing a

Comments

amazing fic, nyaah~

[needtoeat]

i like the way you described the wintry atmosphere of the place and how you described the slowly walking ruki with his red blood dripping on the pure white snow lathered street. [^^]
poor ruki! it must have been so horrible to be beaten up and having abused by thugs alone...all alone in all those sufferings!!!
and clinging to his thoughts of reita in his 'last' breath ---that scene--- was totally dramatic. i love it.
the sobbing reita clutching ruki's hand was also a heartwarming scene.
and yes, reita should just pick up ruki next time and always../^^/
good job!!!

<33

[yujira]

Aww...thank you so much for that lovely comment.I'm so glad you liked it . T//T

[nien_niena]

[yujira]

Sankyuuu ! <3

[wavelle]

Wow, I'm really impressed that english isn't your 1st language (nor mine) and you described so well! I really liked the oneshot and hope you continue writing more fics >w

[yujira]

Yay I'm glad that my English is acceptable xDD Thank you so much! And definitely, I have a lot of ideas and I'm already working on my next fic ^^

[veechuu]

it was greaaaaaatttttt www
i love it!! i love it!! xD

[yujira]

Thank you dear! <3