When I'm With You (BaeRi)

Jul 17, 2009 11:25

            “Seung Ri!” Young Bae cried out, fighting back his laughter. “Seung Ri, you’re turning blue!”

Even with his squinted eyes, Seung Ri tried to glare at the older boy. His cheeks were hurting, not to mention his head.

“Ri, stop it!” Young Bae yelled, in a mix of laughter and concern.

The younger boy ( Read more... )

p: baeri

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yuki_dizon July 17 2009, 03:28:18 UTC
SPOT~
for dongbangsuju20

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dongbangsuju20 July 17 2009, 10:20:22 UTC
YAAY <333

thaank you ^^
this is so sweet and cute how Seungri tries to hold his breath <33
the end is cute~ *hehe*

I was smiling through the entire thing ^-^
you used the prompt really good <3
thank you ^-^

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openedlocket July 17 2009, 03:35:02 UTC
Awww so unexpected and sweet. Gosh Ri is so mysterious. I just love how he reasoned his not-breathing to that fact. It's like he's revealing a hidden something, a simple secret that no one even thought about. Just a few reasons why I like the last line. I don't know why you didn't like this, for some reason, something about it makes me want to read it again...which is what I will do now.

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minn_rox July 17 2009, 03:38:48 UTC
SPOT!!

I see you're back with you always awesome fics..though none are for me..huhuhu...i dont care..i'll read them neways..

i kinda shipping baeri a lot these days..all thanks to bluemonkies amazing baeri fics..

i love the last line..it's so full of meaning that made me floats like stupid bird..

good to see you again..*panda hugs tightly*

you know i always love you rite?

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yuki_dizon July 17 2009, 03:43:54 UTC
Aww thanks for reading!
BaeRi's awesome, right? LOL
*huuuug!*
Yes, I do. ILY2!

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haelin July 17 2009, 04:11:30 UTC
SPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT and i miss you sneaky dongsaeng.. T_T

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smilli July 17 2009, 05:07:28 UTC
BaaeeeRriii♥

a blue seungri is still an adorable one :)

this fic is love. riri thinks in the most interesting ways, but it's really cute how he takes it so seriously. it shows how much he loves his hyung. i luffles your baeri. it's always so nice and fluffy ^^ i guess sometimes have to take a break fromn the angst that is g-ri xD

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yuki_dizon July 17 2009, 05:22:19 UTC
I'm happy that you like my BaeRi.
I love fluff! LOL
I haven't written G-Ri in FOREVER... :(
Thanks for reading!

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