The Next Best Thing [sequel to Taste of Perfection (TabiRi)]

Jul 17, 2009 15:57

            “I’m really sorry, Seung Ri.” Those were the words Ji Yong had told him the night before his life came crashing down.

The moment Seung Ri opened his eyes that morning, he knew something, everything, was wrong. The air was cold, the other bed untouched, and his heart was screaming the news he didn’t want to find out.

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yuki_dizon July 17 2009, 08:01:06 UTC
SPOT~
for CINDY (cindyxmc)

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cindyxmc July 17 2009, 09:01:48 UTC
omg, i effing love you! XDD
ahahha this is sooo freaking cute.
yes seungri, clear a lot of space in your heart for seunghyun hyung! LOL
ohh, i'm in loveeeeeeeeee. XD
THANK YOU VERY KAMSA, I LOVEEE IT! <333

*cough* now i'mthinking about another sequel to this *cough*
ahahah, where like ji comes back NOT having youngbae after all
and realizing that he does LOVE seungri
but seungri is NOW IN LOVE with seunghyun
and ji is the heartbroken one!
SMART IDEA HUH?! LOLSSSS

oh gosh, not even a million i love you will be enough to show how much i REALLY do love you yuki! <3333
you're the best dongsaeng ever! ^__^

....so how about the second sequel?! heehehe

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cindyxmc July 17 2009, 09:18:17 UTC
............30 MINUTES LATER...............
i just read the warning,
and it said character death.
LOLS =X i so did not realize ji died too.
............did he?! =T
i am absolutely confused now.
ugh, i'm such a loser.

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yuki_dizon July 17 2009, 12:17:00 UTC
LOL yeah
In the first story, Bae died, then in this one, Ji "followed" him.
x]

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openedlocket July 17 2009, 08:09:07 UTC
“What is it, Seung Ri?”
“Then maybe I need to clear a little space in my heart.”
“What are you talking about?”
“Or maybe a lot of space. You’re a big guy after all.” He grinned, rested his head again on the table, and closed his eyes.

So CUTE!!! I loved this ending it was so unexpected. I love how they talk about love, how it can't be forced and how it can't be changed. I love the talk of 'soulmates' strangely enough it's one of the things I think about. The whole 'do we have soulmates' thing is something I think about once in a while. You organized their train of thought very well, I like the transition. Pretty smooth and uhh organized.

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xxdinojuliexx July 17 2009, 09:24:46 UTC
lol...i thought YB died...XD
geeze...
Gah!..
Ji went away?. .
leaving Ri like that...
well he have TOP but how about Ji now?
Sequel?.haha lol
XDD

nice!!! Gah...
Loving the end^^!
Fluff after angst..
nice way to feel better!.. :DD
Gah..filipina ka..
YAY!!..Ang Gling..
Salamat kay "Isang"..
dahil sa kanya ang rameng one-shot(^_~)v..haha lmao! XDD

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yuki_dizon July 17 2009, 12:18:22 UTC
Hmmm.
It depends how you see it, because in this one I really pictured Ji to have died, you know, following Bae. But I guess I didn't make that clear enough.

Thanks for reading!

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mangalover93 July 17 2009, 15:10:46 UTC
“What is it, Seung Ri?”

“Then maybe I need to clear a little space in my heart.”

“What are you talking about?”

“Or maybe a lot of space. You’re a big guy after all.” He grinned, rested his head again on the table, and closed his eyes.

aw love these lines ^^
poor seung hyun (big) he always loved ri, and ri love ji while ji love tae... big mess. but tae is gone and now ji went after him so they are happy in heaven and seung hyun and ri is a couple. ri should have love seung hyun from the beginning xP but then there wouldn't be this awesome story!!!

LOVE YOU!!!!!! AND YOUR FIC!!!!!!!!!!
you are totally AWESOME!!!!!!!
*panda hug!*

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