Until I'm Gone (GRi oneshot)

Jul 31, 2009 23:44

            Ji Yong opened his eyes to the new morning. He was in his apartment, in his room, and on his bed. He groaned, dazed with hangover, and shut his eyes again, wondering how he even got there after the night. Already half asleep, his mind played tiny fragments from before he had blacked out.

There he was, coming out from ( Read more... )

fanfiction: bigbang, p: gri

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yuki_dizon July 31 2009, 15:50:47 UTC
SPOT
for MAI (mangalover93)
and UNNI (haelin)
x]

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mangalover93 July 31 2009, 18:22:04 UTC
gosh, yuki I miss you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3
yey ^^ for GRI you don't know how long I have waited ^^ :D
please, make a sequel??? Pretty please??? *pout* *giving you a panda shape cookie* :)
hey, unnie you agree with me right?? :P

poor seung ri, Ji! how dare you kiss a girl in front of ri?!?! you really need to learn to keep your mind on ri ONLY!!!

i love you and your fics ^^ you know i do and i will always !!! =D you are too AWESOME!!!

*lots lots of pandahugs*

still miss you!

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yuki_dizon August 1 2009, 00:09:18 UTC
I MISS YOU MORE! :P
I'll work on a sequel, sure. ;)
I always make Ri the victim. Poor Ri, but I couldn't make HIM the one to kiss a girl, right? Sorry, Ji! LOL
Awsh, I love you and your stuff EVEN MORE.

*panda huuuug and never let go*

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haelin August 1 2009, 04:41:23 UTC
A SEQUEL IS A MUST!

damn.. i'm about to cry in here.. poor ri ri.. =( AND STUPID JI! how can he do this to ri? just because he's not around, he'll just kiss a random girl at a bar?! dang.. *tears welling up on my own eyes*

i love you yuki..............

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yuki_dizon July 31 2009, 15:51:26 UTC
SPOT for Mira (openedlocket) ~

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openedlocket August 1 2009, 00:29:14 UTC
You were right, you did bring about a violent reaction from all GRi fans.

But I must say, your characters need a vacation for all you put them through. I pity Ri, the suffering-alone-when-no-one-can-see-it-type, who just couldn't take it anymore. I love the anti-dramatic (yet somehow dramatic) way he left Ji. He didn't show his pain directly but the message was clear: he had been hurt, pretty badly.

I'm sorry to make such an analytical review of things. I think it's a safe indication to say that I really liked this fic, for real and not in the usual fangirly sort of way. I don't review as analytically in Sounis as I do your fics. I guess that's the plus side of having someone who isn't a fan review, it helps you prove how good the fic is if the fangirl-ing references were taken away.

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hiroyukishinji July 31 2009, 16:33:58 UTC
NNNOOOOOO they have to get back together! BONGIE WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING?!?!? ITS RI FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!! WHY IN ALL GODS NAME WOULD YOU CHEAT ON THAT?!?! And poor Ri. Constantly dealing with the pain and suffering. gyah -.- i need a happy fic right now.

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yuki_dizon August 1 2009, 00:10:30 UTC
:|
I'm sorry about that. I hope you read your happy fic soon. =)
Thanks for reading

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cindyxmc July 31 2009, 18:35:44 UTC
YOUU,
YOU HAVEN'T WRITTEN GRI IN FOREVER
AND WHEN YOU COME BACK, IT'S ANGST!!
GAH, I LOVE YOU SOO MUCH.
so heartbreaking.

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yuki_dizon August 1 2009, 00:11:41 UTC
:P
You call this ANGST? I don't think so, Cindy. xP
Aww I LOVE YOU TOO.
I do too many mean things to Ji and Ri. >:(
I love you and miss you toooooo! <3

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cindyxmc August 1 2009, 01:45:15 UTC
OF COURSE I CALL IT ANGST!
ri walked out of ri's life.
that's angstyyy. LOL

ahah if you love me and miss me,
you go write a sequel to this and this time,
GRI IS TOGETHER, YAY 8DD
*evil laugh*
<3333

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aishiteru_amie July 31 2009, 18:49:30 UTC
this is heartbreaking..
i'm about to sleep when i saw ur update..
i dun feel like crying, but my heart hurt..
love your ways of writing!
thanks for this wonderful fic~

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yuki_dizon August 1 2009, 00:12:28 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting! x]

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aishiteru_amie August 1 2009, 02:09:07 UTC
no prob..
a good work should be comment aite?
hoping for a happy fic in the future.. ^^
fighting!!

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