Waiting for You (GTOP)

Aug 19, 2009 16:51

            Choi Seung Hyun, you said, “I love it, thanks so much.”

I gave you that shirt, that one personalized t-shirt. You said you loved it. You thanked me for it.

Not too long ago, do you know where I found it?

Still in its plastic. At the bottom of your pile of shirts. Unused.

You said, “I’ll miss you so much.”
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fanfiction: bigbang, p: gtop

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yuki_dizon August 19 2009, 08:55:32 UTC
SPOT for xbigbangx

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xbigbangx August 20 2009, 01:12:31 UTC
aww, that is so... bittersweet..... and sad...
I really liked it, thankies for writing this request for me ^^. I had in mind that it was the other way around, but this was still awesome! x]
I kinda feel sad for Ji, but... I still love this ^^ <333
Thankies for writing, again ^^

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yuki_dizon August 20 2009, 08:21:09 UTC
:D
Thanks so much for requesting!

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openedlocket August 19 2009, 09:05:09 UTC
Why must all your happy endings be bittersweet? I love the indention, how the paragraphs are formed to emphasize on the important parts. For some reason I pitied Ji in the first part with the unused gift, of all the sad parts in this it managed to stand out. Awesomeness as always :D.

PS. I'M SECOND.

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atenais_pala February 23 2010, 01:20:23 UTC
I love the way you write, so delicate.
You really know what you're doing.
I hope you write more GTOP. Its the only yaoi pairing I read.
Thanks...

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