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Four - Chapter 3 - Third Degree - Part 2

Jun 15, 2011 18:30

Continuing from part 1 of this chapter. Thanks to finals I'm really coming down to the wire on this chapter. Critiques/opinions/suggestions are much needed please. I know it's awkward looking it over as I'm finishing it, but deadlines tend to do that. I'm going to get a head start on four to try and avoid this happening again ( Read more... )

four, bugging betas, writing xing

Comments 2

daimera June 17 2011, 06:07:43 UTC

Very good chapter. XD The action was done very well, and the perversion of the demon just fit right in with how anime tends to treat that sort of thing. Part of me isn't even sure if Horumon is permanently dead, and that he'll show up later somehow, but it's mainly due to not knowing how killing demons is handled in this show. I'm assuming that if they kill themselves, it's pretty permanent.

Still, a good read, and I'm looking forward to more!

yukidragon June 17 2011, 06:12:21 UTC

It varies. Most times when a demon is killed it stays dead, even when they kamikaze themselves. Sometimes though it's a fake or they come back from the dead when killed (more than once!) to hound the group later, but the revivals are less often.

Thank you very much for the review and I'm glad you like it! XD