Snow and Ash - Ten

[yukinonamida]

Up until now it is like we have been rising up towards a certain point, like when everything led to its peak not too long ago and ended with rushed goodbyes and visions in dreams.

Is that what will happen again? We have risen up to get to this point, but when there are so many weights being strapped to our backs, is there anything to keep us

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[sheichan18]

DDD:
*heart is broken*
what in the world is happening to koyapi? omg.. i'm like dying and flailing at the same time.. XD

THIS... is... sad.. :(

i remember being like this too at the last parts of 7pog.. lol..
i hope they do get better, reading koyama like this is just too much for me to bear,, and yaay~ ryoshige on the 11th chappy.. hopefully it won't be as heartbreaking as this one.. *fingers crossed*

as always your fic is ♥♥♥♥♥♥

[yukinonamida]

*mends your heart*
Dying and Flailing...I know what you mean. xD

The second half of 7PoG was sad too...but at least they're able to be near each other this time around. It's really hard to write Koyama like this because I always want him to be happy and smother him in love (strange that Shige is my favorite and it doesn't really bother me as much making him be in pain...x_x) but it has to be done. :( He will be happier in the next chapter though.
Next chapter is half fluff and part heartbreaking when Koyama is involved and...I'm not sure how to describe the ending. :o

Thank you~ ♥

[sheichan18]

you are DoS.. i can so feel it... hahahah. and apparently kei chan does too.. :p

and shige in pain is different from kei in pain.. it's like a 1000000000x more painful then it should be because its kei.. and kei is just... (can't find the right word.. hahaha..)

anyway, you'll be posting Wednesday right? so i'll be seeing more fluff and pain for kei chan then..
waaa~ kei *pats him*.. make him happy yuki...♥ he needs to feel your love somehow,.. hahhaha..

[yukinonamida]

I really am...it's bad. XD

It is very different. Kei-chan is just so...gentle and kind and lovely and I don't know...it's kind of a protective feeling I have almost.

I want to get it out tonight but it will probably end up being on Wednesday. It gets a bit angsty at the end.

T_T I want to~

[mikiyu_chan]

Yuuuuuuuuuuuukiiiiiiii!
you're a sadistic, you know that? how much are you going to torture me like this??
waaaaaaaaaaaaaah! my precious KoyaPiii! i wanna them baaack---! ( ; -;)/
i was without internet and when i came back.... you have slipetd Koyapi again!! ;-;
that's cruel, my dear-!

but.... i still trust you.... even thought you're this sadistic i know you are gonna compensate me and put them together in the end, right, right???
haha.

oh my.... i so sad now.... xP

[yukinonamida]

I think I am DoS. I'm sorry~ ;_;

Have faith in them!~

[mikiyu_chan]

this is what i always wanted to know...what DoS means? XD

haha...
but i do! i know you're gonna make them be happy and together~!

[yukinonamida]

It just means very sadistic. Which it seems I am D:

[snow_meow]

I got a bit confused at first as it was Shige then it was Kei's memories of him and Pi as there was no indication that it was Kei's thoughts and no longer Shige's.

I really wonder has Pi moved on or it's just that he thinks he has.
I feel so sad for Koyama.

[yukinonamida]

Oh wow. The difference forgetting one word can make x_X I fixed it, so sorry for the confusion! Thanks for pointing it out.

[snow_meow]

Should I be checking all previous chapters for updates?
I ask because I am saving your fic.

[yukinonamida]

I don't remember changing anything in previous chapters after posting them if that's what you mean :)

[2morrow_is_now]

YAMAPIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
what is he doing? moving out??????
poor kei-chan

...there's something off with ryo. i feel.
what's going on?
and i don't want that mean twin-person again.

&hearts

(oh and btw, you seem to have missed the marker from the beginning of koyama's part?)

[yukinonamida]

He's staying with Reiko and his family...not permanently as of right now.

There is something off with him. And...as for Shiku, the story is named after her ^^;

Yeah, I just fixed that...sorry if it confused you! :3

[2morrow_is_now]

yamapi staying with reiko is no good, at least for his relationship with kei-chan.

i kind of got it was named after her, but she's a mean person that wants to hurt ryo, and i don't like people who try to hurt my ryo-chan.
but i guess it can be helped...

i figured it out after a while, it's alright.

^^
&hearts

[sanshinyia]

naww, poor kei-chan~ D: *hugs him*

still not giving up hope on the flame of love though! o_O i still have faith in it and i hope kei-chan will find faith in it too xD

ne, i hope that Chapter Eleven deals with mostly RyoShige doesn't mean anything troublesome.x_X ...though i guess it does, after all shiku was brought up again :P my logic says there can't be anything good coming. :D

[yukinonamida]

*hugs him with you* Group hug~ :D

Yamapi needs to find some faith in it. D:

Mmm...I'm finishing it up now. It's half good half bad. But the good half is the last truly good part for a while. :x

[sanshinyia]

yey! :D ...shige can join us too, can't he~ xD

they both need to. D: i'm so full of faith here but they, who should be, just aren't...o_O that's not how a relationship is saved you guys! XD

*cries* you're so mean making them suffer like that~ XD but on the other hand i'm really curious what you have come up with this time.o_O i really have no idea, except that i'm sure it has something to do with shiku. and probably with mika and reiko too :D

i'm speculating things here again~ :P

[yukinonamida]

Of course he can! :D

It does have something to do with the...4 of them, or 3 if you count Shiku as one person. xD Shiku mostly though. She didn't get what she wants, so it wouldn't make sense for her to just disappear. :o Lots of things are going to start happening, especially starting in chapter 12.