Argh ! I'm really bad at this kind of exercise, so I hope my comment won't sound to harsh (you know I love your writing -all of it, past and present-, don't you
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It wasn't harsh at all! ^^ Even if it was, it's still good because I love improving. :)
I'm glad that the characterization improved. ^^ That was a big issue in the past stories and I really wanted to change that so I'm happy that it worked out. :D I tried to include the other 4 as much as I could~ :)
I did. In the past (as you know) I updated every day and kinda made it up as I went along with an idea of the ending. This time I planned it better and put more thought into the chapters and details. I'm glad that showed as well ^^
Thanks so much for the feedback <3 I will try to work on the supporting characters more in the future~ ^^
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Thanks ^^ It's the one I've had the most fun writing actually :)
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the plot is unique and the twist of the story is amazing.
keep up the good work!
please right more nishikato ficts! XD
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I'm glad that the characterization improved. ^^ That was a big issue in the past stories and I really wanted to change that so I'm happy that it worked out. :D I tried to include the other 4 as much as I could~ :)
I did. In the past (as you know) I updated every day and kinda made it up as I went along with an idea of the ending. This time I planned it better and put more thought into the chapters and details. I'm glad that showed as well ^^
Thanks so much for the feedback <3 I will try to work on the supporting characters more in the future~ ^^
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