7 Prices of Greed Final Chapter

Feb 24, 2009 21:30


Title: 7 Prices of Greed (Chapter 16/16)
Author: Yuki
Group: NEWS
Pairing: Kato Shigeaki x Nishikido Ryo, with bits of KoyaPi
Genre: AU, Supernatural, Action, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Summary: After an experimentation gone wrong, Tegoshi, Yamapi, Koyama and Massu were given different abilities - manipulation of electricity, freezing time, healing, and ( Read more... )

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badbatazz February 25 2009, 07:41:34 UTC
thank you so much.... i really enjoy this series and i like it when you wrote in in a POV mode. glad that they are through this together.

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yukinonamida February 25 2009, 21:07:40 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^ I'm going to be writing my next fic completely in first person POV because it seems to work better when trying to write emotions and feelings ^^

Thanks for reading :D

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shigekawai February 25 2009, 08:39:49 UTC
Happy ending^_____^ They're togheter and Happy it's good!!! Even if Shige have the curse he is happy with Ryo!! There is to much happy in this sentence, but it resume my feeling!!!
I'll look forward your next fic!!

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yukinonamida February 25 2009, 21:09:02 UTC
There is a lot of happy in your comment, but that makes me happy :D lol

I hope you like the next one too~ :D

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setsuna_31 February 25 2009, 09:19:32 UTC
I thought this would be a sad farewell to the fic demou, it was nice yet sweet for both of them. ^___^

And the line that made me smile too much...

“Spit it out,” Ryo snapped and took another sip.
“Having sex.”

And this...

“You-“ Ryo coughed a few more times before smirking at Shige. “Your power is making you dirty-minded.”

Wahhh!!! You made me and Nishikato... *points at my icon*!!! <333

Thanks for the wonderful fic Yuki-chan~

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yukinonamida February 25 2009, 21:11:52 UTC
They deserved to be happy together ^^

Lol he got a sneak preview xD

Thanks for reading Lara~ ^^

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bellemainec February 25 2009, 09:53:11 UTC
a fabulous way to end it. I have really enjoyed this series, you have done a great job with pacing, characterisation, genre conventions and relationships and the technical aspects are really well written. I also liked how you wove in the known and recognisable characteristics of the NEWS boys into the new setting, and I liked your original characters as well :)

And I like the idea of the ending as well :)

Thanks for writing it, and I look forward to your next piece.

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yukinonamida February 25 2009, 21:15:23 UTC
Thank you so much ^^ I always love to know what I have done well :D It really means a lot to me. <3

Thanks again for reading and I hope you enjoy my next story as well. :)

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nadeafu February 25 2009, 11:43:43 UTC
yay last chappy.
it was awesome... damn great. one of the best fics from u!!!
thnx u for this ;))

love every part of it!
keep up the good work!
& i cant wait for ur next project! hohohohoo ;p
^____^

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yukinonamida February 25 2009, 21:16:03 UTC
It was one of my favorites :)

Thanks for reading this one as well ^^ I hope you like the next one as much~ :D

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