If Only I Had...Chapter 2

[yukinonamida]

Title: If Only I Had...(Chapter 2/20)
Author: Yuki
Pairing: RyoShige
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Romance, Supernatural, Angst
Warnings: Violence/Abuse
Summary: Losing a loved one is one of the most difficult things to live with and we always wish for a way to bring that person back. However, there are some times when that person is better off dead.

Comments

[fairy_illusions]

Am I actually first?

THANK YOU FLIST PAGE! XD

[fairy_illusions]

Awwww...

This Jiro guy...I want to kick and smack him and punch him like no other. gahhhh And I don't want him to ruin the pond for Shige. It was where he and Ryo-chan got together. Stupid print twin Jiro needs to back off or I'll chuck pebbles...no ROCKS...at his head! gah.

Yuki...my heart aches for Shigeeee D: (though that tidbit about RyoShige a few years back was squee worthy xD)

[yukinonamida]

Believe me you will want to do that even more as the story goes on :P The next chapter will continue the story from the past and the pond will be ruined~ :(

And it's only the beginning x_x

[sanshinyia]

The chapter 2! ^^ I didn't need tissues, yey! xD

I can hardly imagine how does it feel when someone dead who used to be really close to you appears again and is the opposite.O_O Well you understand what I mean even though I don't know how to explain it clearly.XD If like my great uncle walked past me some day I would freak out.

The place they're living in seems to be quite idyllic. I get the feeling that you have a perfect image of it in your head and somehow manage to transfer it forward thus making it seem so real.:P

These short narration parts in the middle of everything are great.:D I like them for some reason~ haha, for once I wrote a long comment.xD Oh, and they kissed! Though it was in the past but anyway.^^'

[yukinonamida]

Ah, you're quick! I actually just went back and changed a few things thinking no one would read it so quickly xD

It is freaky and twisted and wrong. :P

Awesome :D I have a very clear picture of it in my head and I'm glad I was able to get that across. :)

Thanks ^^ I needed something to tie together the present and past without the words coming from Shige.

3 times :P It still happened so it is still happy...sort of.

[sanshinyia]

I just happened to check if there was something new, this is rare for me to be this quick.XD Did you change anything vital?'o'

I don't know if the picture I got is even near the same, but it's impossible to get the exactly same image to the reader.:P

Sort of happy?'o' Oh no, sounds like tissues to me.:D

btw, I'm spamming again XD, have you seen the News scans from April's Duet and Potatoe?O___O

[yukinonamida]

Not anything too important. Some things sounded awkward and so I reworded a few things. I also changed it a bit so it showed that Shige liked Ryo when the friends were teasing him about it

My picture is very old-fashioned, traditional and artsy xD But if you have your own clear picture of it that is still good :)

Next chapter I will continue the story from the past because I didn't get a very important piece of the puzzle: How Ryo actually died. So yes, tissues might be needed. x_x

YES POTATO SHIGE AND CLOCK *drops dead again*

[anonymous]

update soonnnnnnnnn

amazing chapter

[yukinonamida]

I will try ^^ Thanks for reading <3

[jockyasian2]

This is flipping CUTE!!
I LOVE YOUR NEW FANFIC!!!!
this is kszjdfkasndfjgawofhskdf i dont know how to explain your awesome writing!!

[yukinonamida]

lol ^^ They do have a cute past~ :)

<3 Thanks ^_^

[yukinonamida]

It is only the beginning :)

Thanks so much <3

[yukinonamida]

It is :x I don't know what to say other than it makes me really happy to hear things like that <3