If Only I Had...Chapter 11

[yukinonamida]

Title: If Only I Had...(Chapter 11/20)
Author: Yuki
Pairing: RyoShige
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Romance, Supernatural, Angst
Warnings: Violence/Abuse in chapters 1-6
Summary: Losing a loved one is one of the most difficult things to live with and we always wish for a way to bring that person back. However, there are some times when that person is

Comments

[vinyaromeniel]

After all, Jiro is another victim of Ara. stupid sdohsoihsodhvsdovh

And yay another chapter :D

I hope things will work out fine.. for everyone (excluding Ara she should just go to.. wherever.. poor baby)

[yukinonamida]

The poor child growing inside of such an evil woman...=(

Thanks for the comment ;D

[elite_smile]

Hm, it seems my favourite character in this has become Jiro XD I'm so glad you explored his side of the story.

I wonder... since there are no police there, what will happen with the whole shooting incident? Humdeedum, dunno.

Ah, poor Asami. I wonder if Jiro will let Ryo and Shige have their date anytime soon, since she's hospitalized, ya know? Hm, I have dumb queries.

[yukinonamida]

Jiro is so likable now as compared to the first few chapters x_X All he needed was to experience love and happiness and even though some of it comes from what Ryo feels, he has found happiness with Asami. ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed his POV ^^ I think I might go into it again later on :)

Nothing~ :/ People will hear about it and they might be afraid but sadly nothing else will happen. :(

They're not dumb at all ^^ Even though Asami is in the hospital, she still wants to hear that story :). As a spoiler, the date will probably happen in chapter 13. :)

Thanks for the comment <3

[yukinonamida]

Yup. I like exploring different POVs because it adds a little something to the story as a whole :) It also helps that he isn't feeling Ryo's pain anymore.

I don't think anyone likes Ara. Poor girl...actually no, I don't feel sorry for her. :P I feel sorry for the baby.

Sadly, her illness doesn't have a cure so things aren't looking good for her. :(

Yeah, I'm hoping to get 12 out soon as well.^^

[jockyasian2]

oh my gosh!! SHIGE
shige got hurt!!!! our poor shige
ARA!! she's so mean!! i dont like her
Jiro is being kind! hehe that makes me happy!
uhh what else was i going to say... oh yeah
WONDER CHAPTER
i like how you split up the POVs it made me alot more interesting and addiciting (but your stories are already addiciting enough)
cant wait for the next chapter

[yukichannokoe]

I know x_X It was hard to write because I just wanted to hug him when he was afraid. ;-;

Happy!Jiro is always good, for both RyoShige and Asami :)

Thanks ^^ I like writing different POVs in one chapter. I'll probably do Jiro/Shige/Ryo again next chapter. :) I'm glad you're addicted! ^_^

I just realized I didn't switch accounts but you know it is me ^^ Thanks for reading <3

[jockyasian2]

YEAH different POVS!! your stories are like a drug...

haha if you didn't tell me you didn't switch i would have never known. haha

[yukinonamida]

A drug that is healthy too :) Except it can sometimes mess with the heart x_X

Lol I shouldn't have mentioned it then XD

[only_human_baby]

Jiro´s POV surprised me, it was good!
I´m glad he chose Asami, Ara is crazy and needs to be locked up somewhere.
Finally Shige gets shot LOL, but he is ok,the one that worries me is Asami, after she got a few days for Ryo&Shige this happened to her...
Really interesting chapter ^_^

[yukinonamida]

Thanks ^^ It was definitely needed, especially with Asa's last few days out of the hospital.

Finally? o_O lol. Yeah, Asami isn't doing so well. =/

Thanks for the comment ^^