If Only I Had...Chapter 13b

[yukinonamida]

Title: If Only I Had...(Chapter 13b/20)
Author: Yuki
Pairing: RyoShige
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Romance, Supernatural, Angst
Warnings: Violence/Abuse in chapters 1-6
Summary: Losing a loved one is one of the most difficult things to live with and we always wish for a way to bring that person back. However, there are some times when that person is

Comments

[kiariyuna]

That's so sad...I just...can't...agh. I can't think of what to say.

It was really beautiful, and I think that you really captured their love for each other, I'm also glad to see Jiro feeling unhappy about being away from Asami because it shows he's human and not just a jerk.

I'm excited for the next chapter, but it looks like it will be sad. Good work no matter what though!

[kiariyuna]

Oh I got first. ^^

[kiariyuna]

Also I love the new layout. I will stop posting one sentence comments now, I promise. XD

[yukinonamida]

They did have happiness though for a little while ^^;

Thanks so much :D It is hard to be away from someone especially when you know they are sick like that. :(

I'm glad you like the layout :D I love that picture of them

[yukinonamida]

*lips are sealed* ^^;

Thanks ^^ the picture is from the recent Only Star

[swang11]

I'm at a loss for words. This is utterly amazing. Every emotion and action. Has been depicted so beautifully. I honestly love how this is written!

It's been a while since I've posted a comment and these words just needed to have been said so thank you!

:D

[yukinonamida]

Aww thank you so much ^^ I'm glad you like it :D

Thanks for the lovely comment <3

[waffi]

;_; It's so sad...at first I thought..."well a bittersweet feeling in this chapter" but then at the end...it's so sad~ It makes me almost cry...>_>
...but nonetheless I really like this chapter too...although there was a bittersweet feeling it felt...somehow right...it was sad and at the same time beautiful....poor Jiro...I feel really sorry for him but...I'm eager to know what happens next after Asami's death...

...I really like your new layout! When I saw it I just thought: well, well, this picture goes around very fast XD yesterday I saw an icon of it and today I downloaded the scans and now it's your new layout~ <3

[yukinonamida]

I think it was bound to be sad even if nothing happens because it is the last day :( Even the happiness was sad that way.

Thanks! ^^ The awesomeness of that picture just cannot be ignored :D

[only_human_baby]

This second part of the chapter was pure angst,it´s so sad but the last line gives me a little bit of hope, maybe that bitch, Ara, is gone? I hope the baby is ok, aw when Ryo is happy, Jiro is suffering and viceversa, srly.
Poor Jiro LOL I cannot erase the fact that this body was fucked by a guy last night and I also cannot stop myself from feeling disgusted at the pleasure Ryo felt during it LMAO!!
And that pic of Ryo and Shige, is so cute ^_____^, all the right pairings in that photoshoot!

[yukinonamida]

I didn't mean for it to be so angsty ^^; It just sort of turned out that way :o

Lol poor Jiro, he had to go through it not once but twice :P

I know! :D The Koyamapi one was also extremely adorable <3